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Devil's Grey - Episode 7 "The Closer" [SEASON FINALE - UPDATED NOV 18th]
04-12-2012, 04:15 PM
Post: #31
RE: Devil's Grey - Episode 6 "West Side Connections" [UPDATED NOV 27th]
(01-12-2012 10:03 AM)renan.nunes.f Wrote:  Hahahaha, what can I say... Its his thing, the bear. His signature - sort of.

Next episode is the season finale already, and the bear is gonna be guest-starring. What he'll do next? hehe
Ooooh last episode coming up?! Well I look forward to finding out about Mr Evil the Bear!
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18-12-2012, 11:58 PM
Post: #32
Devil's Grey - Episode 7 "The Closer" [SEASON FINALE - UPDATED NOV 18th]
SEASON FINALE OF THE FIRST SEASON

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DAVIS: And we are, again, in a very bad situation.

REBECA: Yeah.

DAVIS: I must say I'm a little disappointed with you, Rebeca.

REBECA: You can stick your disappointment in your...

DAVIS: Calm down. Slowly.

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Rebeca walks to the window. She feels that for the first time she's not the one who's beeing judged by the city, but the opposite.

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Davis is close behind her. And speaking directly into her ear.

DAVIS: I could stay here listing your flaws and blaming you and judging you. Instead I will just thank you.

REBECA: This is new.

DAVIS: The fact is that there is a good chance of the FBI closing the case and all that is due to you.

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REBECA: No. It's due to the courage of Robert Langley.

DAVIS: We can only do so much...

REBECA: I failed.

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DAVIS: That's a matter of perspective.

REBECA: Mine is straight forward.

DAVIS: Your is blurry.

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Rebeca agonizes in thought, wondering his whereabouts. In the back of her mind, she knows he is no more.

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Life can be short and unfair. His crimes may never see the light of day. The truth may not set you free. Sometimes there is no chance of escape what awaits you.

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Robert bleeds on the floor, eyes wide open, staring at the ceiling. What can be said about his final moments? What was he thinking?

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At least he tried to correct his mistakes. Even for selfish reasons, do some good instead of pure evil.

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Jerrod continues to beat Shadow, who barely reacts to bumps on his face and stomach.

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He can feel the taste of blood, almost fainting. Jerrod is winning, what he wants?

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Jerrod throws Shadow against the wall, grabs his neck tightly and don't let go.

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JERROD: Always very weak. You are exactly the person I remembered.

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SHADOW: And you're still the same sadistic bar steward.

JERROD: I prefer to think that I found my true god.

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And Jerrod loose a loud laughter, still holding Shadow's neck.

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JERROD: Still doing the same dirty services as always? Unlike you, I evolved. I went further. Of course I would not expect the same from you... No, no...

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SHADOW: I've changed, yes. And I don't do these dirty services you have in mind!

JERROD: This is good. I don't believe you, your liar faggot.

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And punches Shadow's face, who's barely able to open his eyes after. Blood on the wall and on his face.

JERROD: Wake up! Open your eyes, you f***ing coward! Be a man at least once in your life.

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Jerrod grabs him and throws him to the ground. Shadow is agonizing on the floor, unable to stand, even with much effort. The blood drips on the floor, the smell of disinfectant comes up again.

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SHADOW: Why are you after Rebeca? Who put you behind this?

He can speak almost haltingly, trying to catch his breath.

JERROD: And who is this Rebeca? Your girlfriend?

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Shadow coughs some blood on the floor and lie on his side to face Jerrod, who is approaching, bowing to the ground to get very close to Shadow.

JERROD: Tell me something, Shadow... Did you sucked her p**** already?

And laughs.

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Shadow gets up and hits Jerrod with a punch in the face, who staggers back with the thud. He's surprised.

I lowered my guard - he thinks.

SHADOW: Shut up!

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He can barely speak. Feeling the awful taste of blood still in his mouth, increasing. And then imagining that he must be very hurt.

Jerrod approaches again.

JERROD: Pissed? Just because I asked about Beca's p****?

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Shadow hits him again and Jerrod almost falls into the bed laughing, amused to see that Shadow finally managed to react.

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JERROD: It's funny because I always thought you were c*** sucker. Isn't that what they called you years ago?

Jerrod makes a face of confusion and disgust.

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SHADOW: You don't know me!

JERROD: Disgusting, man! Shame to be you...

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And laughs of derision, while waiting for a new reaction from Shadow.

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Shadow decides that it is enough and he walks to the door.

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JERROD: Stay calm. She is no longer my target. My client canceled the hit. That bitch got lucky!

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SHADOW: Then why are you in town?

JERROD: Reliving old times. Don't you miss the old days?

SHADOW: No.

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Jerrod goes to Shadow. Face to face.

JERROD: Of course not... Me? I rather enjoyed myself. Still have those scars?

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Shadow is annoyed and feels like a ten year old boy afraid of the bogeymen. Jerrod realizes, recognizes his effect near people. It feeds him.

JERROD: Calm down, man. Why so serious?

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And laughs. After giving a good caricatured scare in Shadow, who closes his eyes reflexively.

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Jerrod continues laughing and walks inside, near the bed.

JERROD: We're still going to bump into each other eventually. This was fun. I'm all energyzed. I think I'll go out for a couple of drinks... Care to join? Who knows, maybe bang some bitches...?

He laughs loudly.

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JERROD: Oops! Oh yeah, you wouln't like it! Sorry...

Jerrod is still laughing at himself.

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Shadow walks away and slams the door.

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Rebeca, very carefully, help Shadow to sit on the couch.

SHADOW: Ouch...

REBECA: Sorry. Shadow, who did this to you?

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SHADOW: Don't worry. Everything is under control, doc.

REBECA: I doubt that very much. Are you sure? I've never seen you so...

SHADOW: I have. And you have to think about other things now.

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REBECA: This is absurd. I won't think in my case now with you in this state.

SHADOW: Seriously doctor, everything is good. This was nothing.

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Rebeca decides to move away a bit and looks at him with affection and attention. Worried about what might happen next, wondering if it is her fault.

SHADOW: We have to find Robert.

REBECA: Unfortunately it is too late for that. But we can still save Frederic Back. I will not stand to lose anyone else!

SHADOW: So that's what we do.

REBECA: You rest there. And sleep a lot. Davis and I are working on it.

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Shadow is discouraged.

SHADOW: Ah... Davis.

REBECA: He already knows everything. I had to tell him. Things got out of our control. The case got bigger than all. He had to know we need to get help.

SHADOW: Congratulations, doctor, you closed the case.

REBECA: I don't know if I deserve congratulations, but I closed the damn case!

SHADOW: We did what we could do. They were already marked to die before entering in your office. It was not our responsibility.

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REBECA: And thanks to the courage of a man, the FBI has the best chance in seven years to close this case, or at least most of it.

SHADOW: Night, doctor.

REBECA: Good night, Shadow.

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And the light illuminates the city, even if their spirits are weary and wandering in the thought that things did not ended as they should.

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Rebeca makes an insistent face in trying to make Frederic change his mind about her proposal.

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He doesn't show any willingness to help.

FREDERIC: I have two small children, I can't do what you're asking me!

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REBECA: You already are in great danger, its the least and most important, its the only thing you can do now. Take control. Be strong and take control of the situation.

FREDERIC: I'm a dead man if I make a deal with the FBI, so its the same, the difference is that I can try to get escape if I'm free.

REBECA: Are you willing to risk Adam Hall using your children against you?

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FREDERIC: That's not it. They are safe, they are out of town. He can not find them.

REBECA: He's a powerful man. He can do whatever he wants. It should not be hard to find two children. That is, if he thinks it is necessary to end the threat that you are at this moment.

FREDERIC: I must leave the country, it's my only way out.

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REBECA: You were part of the Big John and Adam Hall drug operation. And that covers the whole country, imagine that the government will not spare any effort to find him. Remember that the only leverage you have is your need to leave the scheme. And you can only do this if you help the police.

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FREDERIC: Yes, I know, but I... No...

Frederic tires. Gives up arguing.

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Rebeca imagine new ways to convince him.

REBECA: Frederic. It's the last time I'll ask... Either you make a deal with the FBI in exchange for immunity and protection and help in the case, or you'll be a dead man. Please, do the right thing.

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FREDERIC: I've made my decision.

REBECA: And?

FREDERIC: I'll flee from the country. And that's it!

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Rebeca is thoughtful, doesn't skimp on the face of disappointment.

There is only one more thing to be done.

For the old police detective times - she thinks.

REBECA: You know what I think?

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And then she gets up and goes to the door.

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She looks Frederic again.

REBECA: I think I got a clean confession you. Good luck in prison.

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Rebeca opens the door and goes away. Shortly after, FBI agents enter the house announcing that Frederic Back is under arrest.

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REBECA: Do you think my pen drive's content plus Frederic's confession is enough to start the prosecution?

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PHILLIP: I think we have enough to make some arrests. It's just the beginning, but it's a nice start. Adam Hall is a great find, agent number one.

Rebeca smiles.

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Davis looks Phillip with a strange face, confused by his intimacy with her.

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Davis gets closer to her ear and asks.

DAVIS: Agent number one? What the...

REBECA: It is an old nickname...

DAVIS: Holy sh...

REBECA: Hey, this is between me and the FBI, ok?

DAVIS: No need to be rude like that.

REBECA: Seriously, Davis?

DAVIS: Why?

REBECA: Dude, no. Just, no...

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Davis gets confused and Rebeca keeps smiling to Phillip.

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Rebeca and Davis, lying in bed, looking up and sideways. The city noises are muffled by the window. The feeling is that the truth was finally heard.

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REBECA: It'll never work.

DAVIS: Don't quit now. Look, if you must know, in my opinion, and I don't care what others think, you are an excellent private detective.

REBECA: I don't... I didn't mean that, but thanks.

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DAVIS: What then?

REBECA: We-We will never work.

DAVIS: I know.

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Rebeca is surprised with Davis. And leans a little, leaning on her elbow.

REBECA: You know? I mean, do you agree?

DAVIS: I wasn't supposed to agree?

REBECA: No, of course, you have your own thoughts. Agrees and disagrees with whatever you want.

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He also leans.

DAVIS: Tell me...

REBECA: You can find whatever you want whenever you want. I'm not trying to control you.

DAVIS: Tell me... Let me finish for christ sakes!

REBECA: Ok.

DAVIS: We don't work. Sure. But there are those moments, I mean, at least for me...

REBECA: What?

DAVIS: It feels so right.

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REBECA: Exactly. It feels so right.

DAVIS: Why can't we make it work? It's a big conspiracy.

REBECA: I also can't understand. I mean, we tried, didn't we? Didn't we?

DAVIS: No, yes, we tried... A lot.

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He makes a face.

REBECA: Sometimes things just don't work. Period. Without over analyzing anything.

DAVIS: Yeah.

REBECA: Yeah?

DAVIS: Yes... You are right.

REBECA: And now what do we do? Will things continue casual?

DAVIS: Let's not kid ourselves, Rebeca, after all we already past 40...

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Rebeca's face gets serious. Davis realizes.

REBECA: Who has 40?

DAVIS: You... Me. I have. You don't.

REBECA: Honey, for your information I did 35 this year!

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DAVIS: Is that so... But you... You've done 35 many times. I mean, how many times one can do... Can do... 35?

Rebeca doesn't answer, just stares at him in silence. Davis ponders.

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Rebeca gets up and leaves.

DAVIS: Beca... Come back...

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Rebeca gets out of the elevator...

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And Shadow is found waiting at the door of her apartment.

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REBECA: What are you doing here?

SHADOW: Bringing news.

Shadow follows.

They walk into the living room.

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REBECA: What happened?

SHADOW: Robert Langley.

REBECA: They found him?

SHADOW: Yes, they found. I'm sorry, doctor.

REBECA: Oh...

SHADOW: The police found him in the woods outside the city. They dropped his body there.

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Rebeca doesn't react and need to sit down. She puts her hands in her eyes, as if trying to inhibit a large cascade of tears. Shadow slowly approaches.

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SHADOW: Big John's men. I'm sure.

REBECA: Yes... Case closed.

SHADOW: There is nothing you could do, doc.

REBECA: I know, Shadow... I know. But I...

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She gets up and goes to the kitchen while lighting a cigarette. Shadow follows.

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She takes a long drag.

SHADOW: If you need me...

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REBECA: Sure.

SHADOW: I know that the last thing you need now is a new case or thinking about work at all.

REBECA: No. That's exactly what I need. Focus on... Work.

SHADOW: Ok. I'll see what I can do.

REBECA: Shadow...

SHADOW: Yes?

REBECA: Thank you for everything.

She approaches him and smiles a lot. Shadow smiles back.

REBECA: I can never pay you for your help!

SHADOW: No need, doctor.

REBECA: In that case...

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She hugs him, leaving him surprised.

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After a few seconds, he smells her neck...

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And makes his way to Rebeca's lips, kissing them with passion.

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Rebeca walks away at the same time and pushes him lightly.

REBECA: No!

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Shadow walks away like a lightning. Rebeca doesn't know what to do.

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REBECA: Crap!

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Shadow gets home in a hurry...

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And runs to his refrigerator. Grab a beer.

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And shoots toward the couch, where he throws himself and dives in thought.

I can not believe I did that - he thinks.

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SHADOW: What's wrong with you, Shadow? Idiot!

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He sprawls on the couch, takes a sip of beer and closes his eyes.

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After a moment, he opens his eyes and fixes them on the floor near the couch.

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The bear.

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Shadow gets up and looks for something, the area around the apartment. Nothing.

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He checks all the rooms and nothing. Nobody. Only the bear.

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Comes back to the room and sees the bear. Suddenly he realizes that Jerrod is not going away anytime soon.

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F***er! - He swears Jerrod in thought.

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The doorbell startles Rebeca, who rises from her bed and walks to the door.

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Opens the door. Nothing, just a package on the floor.

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She picks it up and goes back to the living room.

Open the package, finds a CD and nothing else. She goes to her notebook and put the CD to run.

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Rebeca realize that this is a execution video of Robert Langley.

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Robert Langley is in the chair, tied up, listening to Big John to confess his sins. Or everyone's?

BIG JOHN: You are exactly where I wanted you to be. I realized that you would leave the operation and I decided it would be the perfect time to end all this fiddlesticks & flapdoodle. So I threw Adam Hall's name on the wheel... I let you think he was more involved in the operation than he really is. And you see, everything worked fine. The police will go after him, the FBI will think that they made a big arrest and me? I'll disappear from Bridgeport... I will expand my business out there. I'm sure Giuliani is also very grateful for you helping us dispose Hall. Do you know that... They did not get along?

And laughs.

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BIG JOHN: Do you believe everyone thought that they were friends?

And laughes again, mocking.

BIG JOHN: Adam Hall is a big nothing. A puppet. A scapegoat. And you made him look like a monster, congrats... I thank you, come again.

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He gives a coldly smile, along with murderers eyes, denouncing what will happen soon.

BIG JOHN: Unfortunately you can't survive... It's part of the game. But eh, you played your part perfectly... And now tell me... Paranoia doesn't do wonderful things?

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Rebeca doesn't blink. A tear trickles down her cheek. The taste of injustice hangs in her throat. The laughter of Big John in the video echoes through the room.

The city seems to mock her. So much blood, so many lives lost in favor of a big lie.

The phone rings and interrupts her shock.

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She answers.

VOICE: For if god spared not the angels that sinned, but cast them down to hell, and delivered them into chains of darkness, to be reserved unto judgment...

REBECA: You...

VOICE: Did you see the video I sent you?

REBECA: Why you sent it?

VOICE: So you can see it's not over. It will never be.

REBECA: I don't understand.

VOICE: It's like I always say... There are demons in this city. And you... You can't stop them. They are not good people, but being so, neither I, nor you, nor your neighbor nor Detective Davis are good. And Adam Hall... Just got what he deserved. And what we deserve... Is also coming.

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REBECA: I... I can send this video to the police!

VOICE: But you won't. And you know why? Because that would mean that everyone you love would be in danger again. It's what you want?

REBECA: It can't be like this...

VOICE: You can not stop the big machine, Rebeca. You can't against these people.

REBECA: How do you know that I would not dare go to the police?

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VOICE: Since that time you beat me in that nasty alley... You eventually gained my respect. At that moment I thought I'd cut your throat, and I could, don't be fooled, but then I thought better and decided to let you continue.

REBECA: I wouldn't be so sure I'll be quiet if I were you...

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VOICE: I'll tell you what you'll do, you'll burn that video now and throw this thing down in your unconscious and put a massive rock on top. Forever. You got lucky this time, girl, but play with the big fish again and you will lose.

He turns the phone off.

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Maybe it's true, maybe she can't defeat all the demons. The system is too strong.

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But there may be chances of winning the next time...

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And Rebeca feels alone. Feels all guilt.

Until she doesn't feel anything.
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19-12-2012, 02:55 AM
Post: #33
RE: Devil's Grey - Episode 7 "The Closer" [SEASON FINALE - UPDATED NOV 18th]
Now that I've finished school for the year I should have enough time to catch up. Can't wait to read what I missed.

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19-12-2012, 09:36 PM
Post: #34
RE: Devil's Grey - Episode 7 "The Closer" [SEASON FINALE - UPDATED NOV 18th]
Brilliant, really enjoyed your story Smile

That bear!
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21-12-2012, 02:58 AM
Post: #35
RE: Devil's Grey - Episode 7 "The Closer" [SEASON FINALE - UPDATED NOV 18th]
Oh, thank you very much.

About the bear - who knows what's going to happen next season?
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21-12-2012, 11:42 AM
Post: #36
RE: Devil's Grey - Episode 7 "The Closer" [SEASON FINALE - UPDATED NOV 18th]
I am glad to hear there will be a next season!

Clapping

In the meantime why not head over to the Introductions section and tell us a bit about yourself? Smile
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21-12-2012, 09:48 PM
Post: #37
RE: Devil's Grey - Episode 7 "The Closer" [SEASON FINALE - UPDATED NOV 18th]
Have to say, I didn't see that coming - & still plenty of twists left to come I suspect.

Wonderful story, more! Yahoo

Egyptiandance Wacko Fryingpan

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03-01-2013, 01:27 AM (This post was last modified: 03-01-2013 01:27 AM by renan.nunes.f.)
Post: #38
RE: Devil's Grey - Episode 7 "The Closer" [SEASON FINALE - UPDATED NOV 18th]
I'm happy to see that you guys liked the show. I've started to write the second episode of season 2 and I feel like there is more trouble coming soon... >:-)
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05-01-2013, 07:06 PM
Post: #39
RE: Devil's Grey - Episode 7 "The Closer" [SEASON FINALE - UPDATED NOV 18th]
Oh good - I like the sound of more trouble!

Will look forward to reading some more.

Big Grin
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