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Romantic Elegance- Discontimued Until Further Notice
17-04-2009, 02:29 AM (This post was last modified: 01-05-2009 09:55 PM by xxxrachelxxx.)
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Romantic Elegance- Discontimued Until Further Notice
[move][glow=red,2,300]Romantic Elegance[/glow][/move]

Chapter One
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Well, hi. My name is Alyssa Scalene. Umm, and this is my story. Of falling in love. With an older dude. Here's my family.
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Here's my mother, Natalie. She's a world class ballerina, and awesome en pointe. She has a killer fwatte (type of turn).
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Her 'warm up' costume. Preetyy!
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[size=15pt] My dad. Name's Sean Scalene.
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[size=15pt]Chief of staff!

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I've recently moved here from Pleasantview.
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So, that's my family. I'll tell you about the first day of school later.
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Sorry it's so short! Ran out on time.

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17-04-2009, 09:15 PM
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Nice! Keep it up :]
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17-04-2009, 09:18 PM
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Thanks. I'm working on Chpt. 2 right now. It's going to be wayyy longer, but I have a lot of stuff to build!

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18-04-2009, 12:29 AM
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Wow, nice start!

:3  Can't wait for more.

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18-04-2009, 01:32 PM
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It looks + sounds interesting. Ill be sure to check in! Smile

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18-04-2009, 01:41 PM
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Sounds interesting !! I'll be waiting for chpt. 2 !!
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19-04-2009, 12:15 AM
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Here is chapter two. It has a HUGE cliffhanger at the ending, so be sure to stay tuned! Tongue I also spent 2 ENITRE days making these, so please do enjoy. I don't want any "this is so cheesy!" crap and all that jazz.

And just so you know, it was so exhausting, but fun to make, so the next chapter won't be out for another 5-8 days!

PICTURE THEN TEXT!

Chapter Two: First Day of School
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Well, today is the first day of school. And I’m transferred now, so I’m going to a whole new school. A private school. I wonder who I’m going to class with.
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My new school gave me last’s year’s year book.
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Well, somebody got a boob job and a nose job. This is Brittany Solnee. Next!
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This guy is okay. It says Adam Testlake. Odd last name.
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Finally someone cute… Rosalie Hale…..Name sounds familiar.
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Oh god, am I dead because I’m looking at heaven. I luv Ashton Burluck.
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Ha ha… Look. A Hannah McZeland.

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Leanee Burluck…. Somebody’s a geek! I hope she’s nice.
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The headmistress, Ms. Huckley. I wonder what her personality is like.
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Well, that’s enough for now. What will I wear?!?
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This? No way!
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Not this


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Perfect. Ha ha, like my moose ears? I think they’re cute. My signature pose!
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I wonder what Mom will cook for breakfast.
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Ahh! French toast!
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Yummmm!
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“Oh, hi Dad!” I said with great expression.
We talked for a while while I finished my French toast.
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“Well, I have to go to the hospital now. I’m going to operate on a Byron Smith. He needs part of his colon removed. Bye ‘Lyssa!” Dad said.
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“So, do you think you’re going to have a good day?” my mom asked me.
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“BEEP BEEP!”
I hurried up, and went to school.
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So, this is what my school looks like.
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“Hey! You’re the new girl! I’m Ashton Burluck. Welcome to Azdlank High School. It has grades 7 – 12. The middle and low school are for different grades, but that’s another story.” he smiled.
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“How did you know who –,” I heard a crash.
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It was the headmistress. She was lying on the ground. She got ran over by the school’s car.
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An ambulance came, and took her away to Veronaville Hospital. I hope she’s okay.
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Lunch!
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“Umm, hi. My name is Hannah. You’re Alyssa, right? I was wondering if I could sit here.” Hannah asked me.
“Sure...” I answered.
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Leanee sat by us. Ashton’s sister. A lucky, lucky girl.

“I might be having a sleepover in December, so I’ve been wondering if you guys would like to come. My mom made me ask me today, towards the end of August, if you guys would come.” Leanee said.

How could I go over to my crush’s house? Oh god, oh god, oh god.
“RINNGGGGGGG!” Nice! Saved by the bell!
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I went over to my locker to get my swimsuit. It was gym time. Swim! Then I went to the bathroom to change.
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Oh my gosh. Ashton is the student teacher!
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“Now, we are going to have a swimming race. Now, go into teams, and we will be using the diving boards.” Ashton declared.
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We quickly paired up. Hannah was on my team, with Leanee and Adam on the other team. Ashton and the teacher, Ms. Benson, watched us.
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“Ready…Get Set…..Go!” the two teachers yelled.
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I came back first. Then Hannah went.
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"And Alyssa’s team has won! Good teamwork. Go hit the showers!" Ashton declared.
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“Hey cutie, you did a great job out there, if you know what I mean.” Ashton flirted.
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“Cutie?” I asked.

“It was either that or button.” he said.
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I raced to the showers, boy I smelled. Bad. School would be over in a few moments.

“Ringgggggg!” School was over. I took the bus home.
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Finally! One-o-clock and I’m free!
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LATER THAT NIGHT:
Later that night, I was practicing my ballet. Somebody knocked on the door. I went to get it.
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"Ashton?" I said with great curiosity.
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19-04-2009, 12:38 AM
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aww, cute! Big Grin

Oh, and if you didn't know, I have another family thread
called The Philips Family if you wanna check it out :]]
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20-04-2009, 02:56 AM
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That's so neat! I can't wait to see what happens!

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20-04-2009, 03:22 AM
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Very nice!
Just to help with spelling, I know this is rather insignficant, but the ballet turns are spelled "fouette".  Big Grin
Anyways I love your story and I can't wait to read more!

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