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Once Upon Some Confusing Encounter
05-10-2009, 02:49 AM
Post: #71
Re: Once Upon Some Confusing Encounter
its not like i wanted her to be abused just out of her moms care - lindy's bad.  nice update though - she moved on fast

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05-10-2009, 02:52 AM
Post: #72
Re: Once Upon Some Confusing Encounter
Great update! I like seeing Lindy feel horrible...  {devil}

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09-10-2009, 06:59 PM
Post: #73
Re: Once Upon Some Confusing Encounter
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I went to visit my siblings, but all who was home was Alex, who wasn't a very entertaining host.  "Alex, do you know where everyone's at?"

"They are out around town, it's none of your concern."

I had no time for his BS, I decided to come by another day.

***Thornton's POV***

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Cory:  Thornton, you really just been sitting in the house in between work and sleep.  Geez, have some fun.
Thornton:  I'm really feeling bad, wished that that divorce didn't go through...
Cory:  Why?  She divorced you, and you weren't cheating!
Thornton:  Well, I admit I been with a few girls during the course of our marriage, but none like a year before the divorce.  Alex, that ugly, he sure is lucky.
Cory:  Thornton, you can get ANY woman you want! 
Thornton:  I'm not really up for marriage anymore.
Cory:  Don't mean that you can't be with one.

Cory was right.  I been depressed since Lindy gotten remarried.  I seemed to had been doing good before her remarriage, but I guess seeing someone else have her made me jealous. 

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I decided to go to the park, just to see who I would meet.  I ended up meeting this cute girl named Lemani.  She was a few years younger than me, but looked really young.  We had a great conversation.  I told her that I wasn't looking for marriage, and she didn't care, she was just as lonely as I.

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That night, I invited her over my place for some "company".

"You have a really nice house, Thornton."
"Awww, thanks." I responded. "It's not much."
"Glad you invited me over.  I would just be at home with my lazy daughter who can't seem to move out the house.  She's just like her lazy father."

She has a grown daughter at home, who is not near as attractive as she.  When Lemani was a very young adult, she met Ian Bowler, who was like 50 or so years older than her.  He died before their daughter was born.

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Lemani and I was just about to get into some action, until Cory just abruptly walked in.

"Wow, Thornton!" he laughed. "Well, who's the lucky girl?!"
"Cory, get out."
"LOL, wow.  Yeah, remember all the precautions.  You don't need no more kids."
"Hell naw."

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"Just gotta fix my collar."
"Cory, I will shove your foot up your...!"
"Okay, have fun!"

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FINALLY!!!

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A few nights later, we celebrated Rudy's fifth birthday.  Bella was feeling too happy.  She made Rudy a confetti cake and put those sparkling candles on it.

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But it turned into a disaster!!!  The freaking cake caught on fire!!!

"DADDY!!!"  Bella screamed. "OMGOMG!"
"See, what did I tell you about those weird candles!  My counter!!!"

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It was hard, but Cory and I managed to get the fire extinguished.

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Overall, Rudy had a great birthday. 

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10-10-2009, 01:20 AM
Post: #74
Re: Once Upon Some Confusing Encounter
WOOT! awesome update! is Bella still a teen and her son is a child. XD

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10-10-2009, 02:17 AM
Post: #75
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happy you updated - hope thornton finds love again and Lindy gets dumped b/c of an ugly child. Smile

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10-10-2009, 02:48 AM
Post: #76
Re: Once Upon Some Confusing Encounter
(10-10-2009 01:20 AM)Yo! who ate my cheese!@ link Wrote:WOOT! awesome update! is Bella still a teen and her son is a child. XD

Yeah, and Bella like had Rudy like 5 days or idk before she transistioned.  She was far into her teenage days.  The game has bad timing...but yeah, Rudy is going to grow up really fast compared to her.

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12-10-2009, 10:52 PM
Post: #77
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***Rudy's POV***

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After school one day, I decided to visit my auntie Ally May.  I really didn't ask Papa, my mommy, or daddy for permission, but come on, I was always out for hours after school...as long as I was home before my curfew.  Aunty Ally May's house was very big and beautiful...looks like my grandma and that man had a lot of money.

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Ally May:  Rudy!  How did you get here!
Rudy:  I rode my bike.  I just wanna visit.
Ally May:  Did you even ask your mom for permission?
Rudy:  (lies)  Um, she said it was cool.
Ally May:  Don't sound like her...lemme call her.  I can't believe that she would let you over here by yourself.
(calls her) 
Ally May:  She's not picking up.
Rudy:  She's out doing things.
Ally May:  Fine, come in...You don't have a housekey, don't you?
Rudy:  (lies) Left it at home.
Ally May:  Is your grandpa home?
Rudy:  He's out trying to mack some babe.

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Auntie decided to let me into the house.  I saw these two boys talking.  "Who are they?" I asked.  "Why do they look all sloppy and stuff?"
"They are your uncles and they are just neglected..."

A second later, a cold, soft hand pulled me by the shirt and dragged me out the house.

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"And just who are you?"  the ugly dude asked.
"Who are you to be pulling my by my shirt?" I questioned him.  "Lucky that I ain't bigger, or else I would had busted you in your peanut head.  Put your hands on me again, and I'll get my daddy to beat you up!"
"You don't talk to me like that!" he snapped.  "You must be from the stupid side of your mother's family.  Lemme guess, your mother is Bella."
"Well, I would rather be stupid than ugly, at least I can find a mate without her marrying me out of sympathy."  I responded. "And yes, my mother is ISABELLA.  That's what you better call her, and I am proud to be her son."
"Your kind is not allowed in my house."  he fussed.
"Well, throwing out your half relatives, and apparently your step-grandchild.  Are you in denial of who you are?"
"Well at least my side aren't teenage parents, which you will be."
"Rather would be a teenage parent than a ugly B--"  I started, until we were disturbed.

Shoo, my mom told me not to back down to no one.

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It was one of my uncles.  "Alex." he sighed.  "Let Rudy in, he's one of our relatives."
"I'm not letting that snotbag in." Alex fussed.
"Mom hasn't seen Rudy in a while."

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Lindy:  OMG, Rudy!  Look how big you've gotten!  Do you remember me?
Rudy:  (sarcastic) Nope, and OMG, look how big you are!
Lindy:  Yup, you are expecting a new uncle or auntie.
Rudy:  Eventually, I am not one of your kind, so it won't be my uncle or auntie.
Lindy:  What?!
Alex:  Lindy, I don't want that snotbooger over here again!
Lindy:  Alex, he's my grandson!  Shut up!

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Somehow, a half hour later, Grandpa arrived.  Uh-oh.

Thornton:  (whispering) Rudy, what did I tell you about going here!  I'm going to tan your hides after we get out of here.
Rudy:  Sorry, was just curious.
Thornton:  Yeah, you're going to be curious about the whip marks on your butt tonight too.  Good thing Ally called me.

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Lindy:  Thornton?  Why are you here?
Thornton:  OMG...not this.
Lindy:  Who let you in here?
Thornton:  Look...what the hell?  You're pregnant?  Geez.  Well, look, I don't want any trouble, I'm just getting Rudy.
Lindy:  What's wrong with Rudy being here?
Thornton:  Lindy, why do you have to start.  Look, he wasn't supossed to be here in the first place.
Lindy:  So I can't see my grandson? I'm not good enough for him?  Look at you and Bella, and that Cory!  You all are living in sin, and his fragile mind is being corrupted by that!  Going to end up just like his parents, and your lying, cheating, womanizing self.
Thornton:  How we live is none of your business, and you can't talk, marrying our kids' uncle.  And I never cheated on you!  Well, may had done some flirting, but that's all, but never went to second base with them.
Lindy:  That's cheating! 
Thornton:  Lindy, know what, our marriage is over, and it's about time Rudy gets home.

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Lindy:  But still, I have the right to see Rudy.
Thornton:  He's not coming here again though.
Lindy:  Oh watch me! He's living with you three unfit people anyways.
Thornton:  So, go ahead and take us to court, so people can know that you're pregnant by your kids' uncle.  How unfit is that?

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The next night, I decided to go back there again.  I told my parents that I was at a baseball game and wanted to see the new Pokemon movie.

I grabbed a cookie, and I was eating it around the house, and Alex snatched it from me.

Rudy:  Give my back my cookie, ugly!
Alex:  No, no, no.  You don't get a cookie.  You're too bad.
Rudy:  I don't want that nasty cookie anyways, no telling where your hands been.  I'll just get another one.
Alex:  I will spank you if you do.  Look, you are a bad child and you don't deserve a cookie
Rudy:  Heh, and you will sure deserve what you are getting.

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Then  I scared the troll.

Rudy:  Yeah, just wait until you get what's coming to you.  Your chicken legs are gonna get broken off and stuffed WAY up you!

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Yeah, I snitched on myself and told my grandpa.  I knew he was going to whip me, but it was going to be well worth Alex getting ripped on.

Grandpa did not beat up Alex, like I wanted him to.  I think he only wanted to make a good example.  He only mocked and made fun of him, then yelled at him, and in the end, I think Alex ran into the house to cry.


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"Daddy"  Aunt Ally encountered him.  "Please, can I live with you?"
"You know that I'm trying Ally.  But you know I can't kidnap you or anything."
"Mom really has been acting like a butt.  Ever since she married Alex and pregnant, she's been all into him and that baby."
"Yeah, look at my sons." Grandpa groaned. "Little weak, unkempt slobs.  Don't play sports or anything."
"Dad, if you do the work, I can tell the court how mom is to me."

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Thornton:  Lindy, do you know that Ally wants to live with me?
Lindy:  I heard you two talking.  Ally just has your genes. 
Thornton:  Well, so does Alex.
Lindy:  But your mother was also a tramp, not his.  Well, what I'm trying to say is that Ally is not like Bella, she has a good head on her, but she is just nerve-wrecking, and causing me stress, which isn't good for the baby.  Probably she does need to go, but Trenton and Thornton are staying here.

Grandpa didn't say any more.  He told Ally to pack her bags, and Aunt Ally went home with us.

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13-10-2009, 01:39 AM
Post: #78
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good - like rudy's point of view - looking foward to seeing how this plays out.  Happy Ally may is going with her father -  Know that baby of lindys is going to be butt ugly - especially with who the father is.

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13-10-2009, 03:08 AM
Post: #79
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Love this point of view! Big Grin
Can't wait for more! Smile

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22-10-2009, 11:33 PM
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Ally May:  How far along are you?
Isabella:  It will be here in a few weeks.
Ally May:  Oh my goodness.  Bella, you are just only a kid yourself.
Bella:  Don't really feel like a kid.  So, does mom know about the pregnancy, with Rudy being over there or anything?
Ally May:  THe woman doesn't even ask about you.

It sickened me that mom didn't even ask about me.  To tell the truth, I was starting to feel bothered by mom.  It didn't seem like she loved me anymore, not since I turned 13. 

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Little Thornton arrived right on time.  I wanted to name my baby after my father, because he was so influential in my life.

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Cory was pissed.  "There is already a Thorntons in your family, Bella.  Why not Cory Jr?"  He looks like me, compared to your father.  "And besides, Rudy looks nothing like me at all."

"What are you implying!" I screamed. "That Rudy's not yours!"

"I did not say that...but he should had been a Thornton, not him."

***Thornton's POV***

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Well, I officially felt old.  My oldest child was now a grown woman.  "Who is that!" I squealed.

"Dad, don't play with me." Bella groaned.

"Oh, my baby's all grown up!" 

My daughter grew up into a beautiful, fine young woman, and I knew that if I was her age, and wasn't related to her at all, she would had been one of the girls I would hit on during baseball games or practice.

I forgot she had brown hair though...

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Lemani:  Thornton, I want to get married.
Thornton:  Lemani, when we first met, I told you I didn't want to get married.
Lemani:  But Thornton, it's good if we get married...um...
Thornton:  I don't care! 
Lemani:  Thorn, I won't hurt you or anything.
Thornton:  Look, marriage isn't for me.  Well, I guess it's the end, since you want a husband.  Don't waste your time on me, a man who doesn't want to marry.
Lemani:  But...sigh...never mind

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I shouldn't had done that to Lemani, because I was being lectured by Rudy about it.

Rudy:  Grandpa, why did you dump that nice lady?
Thornton:  Rudy, that's grown folk's business.
Rudy:  But you was wrong.  You made her fall in love with you.
Thornton:  Rudy, I will have to spank you again.
Rudy:  Go ahead, but come on, it looked like she was going through some deep mess.  You need to talk to her.

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The following day, I was bored, and I admit, lonely...I wanted a woman, and I missed Lindy.  I just had to go over there and look GOOOOD.  It was also the day I realized that I was aging.  I was getting wrinkles around my eyes...and looking older.

"Bella!  I'm talking Thornton out!"

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Lindy:  Thornton?!  Hello!
Thornton:  Hey, so you had the baby?
Lindy:  Yeah.  Duncan.  Is that your baby?  He looks like you.
Thornton:  Bella's boy.  He's another Thornton.
Lindy:  Oh. It make sense.
Thornton:  So, you want to know how your kids are?
Lindy:  How's Ally?
Thornton:  Doing great in school, and Bella's fine.  (lies)  She has this really great job.
Lindy:  So, I see you're getting old too.
Thronton:  LOL.  I know.  You aren't looking so fresh either.
Lindy:  Poor Duncan...going to have old parents.

I just had to see the little ugly for myself...just to see if he looked like one of my kids...since the father was only a half brother.

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Alex:  Why are you here?  To see Lindy and my son?
Thornton:  Hey, it's nothing like that.  Just came over to show Lindy her new grandson.
(thinks to himself)  Now let me see the little ugly.
***Peeks at the baby***
Thornton:  And I am the reason why our kids are so beautiful.
Alex:  Huh?
Thornton:  I said your son is...um....beautiful. 

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