The Poem(s) that I have done

[serp3821]

Okay so I have here a poem that I have written
I don`t know if they`re the best so I am looking for your opinion
if you have any suggestions, please comment and I`ll fix them


there is never a moment when I see the sun set
my house is illuminated by the rays of the sun
I set out in my adventure to find the meaning of love
never has this great fervor ever come to me
but alas, I have met my match, you have defeated me
the defeat was the power of love
you enchant me with your eyes and ways of speaking
don`t you have a weakness where I can strike my love
nothing seems to penetrate your tender heart

as the sun finally sets on the yellow and orange sky
I see you from miles away shining like a pearl
your site enchants me again and brings dreams
lovely is your eyes, mouth, body, and soul
don`t you have an imperfection where I can strike?
nothing seems to mess you up in your ways

I see the mountains change color every sunset
the harmonious songs pass by me like a spell
the memory of you is still in my mind
when will you stop bewitching me
when will you stop loving me
I ask for you stop before its too late
as my heart belongs to another

[-[gooey kablooey]-]

Wow very poetic, Steven (:

I like to write poetry and I have a poem to show you. It's a VERY silly poem, not at all serious
that I wrote for a friend in a minute. It's funny because it's really stupid and it's okay if you don't get it x].


It's called

A Poem From Alisha (freakin' original, eh?)

Do you like cheese
or a bundle of peas
do you think money
is better spent on
your tummy
if you think this is true
i want to get to know you
so you will share with me
all your food;
yummy.