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A Sims Story
29-12-2008, 05:03 PM
Post: #51
Re: A Sims Story
I even had to laugh at those names...it is hard to come up with horrible names on purpose that a lot of people wouldn't want a child to be named.

And that's what I figured about Nelson...I wanted to make everything as real as possible (or as I can get on this website).  I loved how Nelson turned out--what made me worry was with how many glitches TS2 had, I thought that he was a clone of his father, but he turned out being much better looking. 

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29-12-2008, 10:55 PM
Post: #52
Re: A Sims Story
Nelson is a pretty good-looking Sim!
I love this story. You're a great writer. It's so funny how Misty had the baby when nobody was paying attention. {lol} Hey, are you going to show more of the puppies soon?? Smile

[center]<br />CHICKEN NUGGETS.<br />i'm eating some right now. no, you can't have any, you imbecile!
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29-12-2008, 11:28 PM
Post: #53
Re: A Sims Story
I could never get a close shot of those puppies...idk how everyone else does.

But you will see them as dogs though.  Two, I believe are identical twins.

I think their names are Rusty, Dusty, and LeeLee.  (2 boys and a girl)

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30-12-2008, 02:07 AM
Post: #54
Re: A Sims Story
There was an update earlier today, so read that first, if you haven't.
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Part 1 of Update 11:  Takes place in Nelson's Point of View

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Well, in my sophomore year of high school, I got with this girl named Lydia.  I'd been knowing Lydia all my life.  When we were children, she would always pick on me, then in high school, she started to like me.  I'd always liked her, and we found out about each other liking each other, so we decided to go out.  Lydia's mother hated me, so we didn't go to her house, so she went over my house this one day.  She had the most beautiful eyes, and I loved her beautiful hair. 

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Lydia and I decided to go into the living room, where no one was at, to spend time with each other.  Then here comes Michael, all up in my grill.  I was talking nasty to Lydia, you know how teenagers of opposite sexes talk to each other...well I guess Michael had heard some of that.

"So when are you gonna give me some?"  I questioned Lydia.  "You are so beautiful."
"What did you say?!"  Michael shouted.  "I don't want that in my house."

Dang!  Michael was so freaking annoying!  Ma was at work, and she wouldn't had cared anyways.  Ma said woohooing was okay, as long as I took the proper precautions.  Michael was a little punk.

"Damn, Michael!"  I yelled.  "Get out my grill!  Read a book or something!"

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Michael finally walked out.  "I think he isn't watching now."  Lydia said.  "Your dad is only being a father though."
"That isn't my father."  I responded.  "He just wants to be my father.  He needs to father his son, or go bother Rainy."

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Finally, she snuck me the kiss that I had been waiting for forever.  That kiss felt so good, but it wasn't enough.  I needed more.

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So Michael ran to the store for a bit, so it was a good time.  "Lydia, wanna go in my parent's room?"  I asked.  "You know...I want to see more of you."  Lydia agreed.  So we went to my parents' room.  We spent a little bit of time kissing each other and stuff.  It came naturally for me..Lydia, I knew wasn't a virgin.  I guess my mom was such a tramp, that I was a natural at it.  I was sure being Mr. Romantic.  Lydia loved it when I kissed her hand. 

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I wanted to go get the protection that ma gave me, but I didn't want to get out of bed for it.  "Heck, I'll be okay."  I claimed to myself.  So finally, we went at it.  We didn't stop until I finally saw Michael watching us.  He was all quiet...not saying nothing..pervert.  "What the hell!"  I screamed at him.  "Wanna join or something!"

"I should be saying what the hell to you!"  Michael screamed.  "You two are in my bed!  Now I want you two to stop right now."  Then he walked out...I didn't stop right away, skip that man.  He wasn't my daddy, and ma said it was okay.

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That night, Ma had a heated argument with Michael.  Michael started yelling at Ma as soon as she'd gotten home.

"Nelson wouldn't be out of control and doing all this stuff, if it wasn't for you!"  Michael screamed.  "Now, if you don't want a grandchild soon, I'd insist that you better set your boy straight!"
"Look, Nelson is none of your concern."  Ma screamed back.  "I'll handle the boy myself, but I did tell him that it's okay.  I can't keep tabs on him all the time, so there isn't a camera on him, showing all he does.  It is up to him to make the right decisions."
"But he does not have respect for neither of us!"  Michael yelled.  "They did it right in our bed!  So we have to change our sheets, pillows and stuff...naw..he's gonna do that!  Any other child would have common sense not to do that in their parent's house, and they would have the dignity to not do that in their parent's bed!"
"I'll handle him."  Ma stated. 
"I took in this boy as my own son."  Michael said.  "I treated him like he was my own and I'd done everything to him, but I can't deal with his rudeness!  He is making me bald!"

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Rainy was crying the whole time.  She thought they were going to get a divorce.

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Months passed, and Lydia told me that she may be pregnant.  We had been doing the deed off and on.  I was totally scared and I didn't know what to do.  Possibly being a father was killing me!  I was too young to be a father, and I wasn't ready.  I spent days crying, but crying wouldn't do any good, so I decided to start caring for Malcolm. 

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Weeks after that, Lydia stopped talking to me totally.  So I knew that we were done.  I guessed that she wasn't pregnant, or else she would had told me.  Summer break was coming, and I was single.  I talked to Ma about it...I told her that I didn't use what she'd given me.  At first, Ma was upset, then she told me about her life and all the mistakes that she'd made with men. 

After talking to her, I really knew that Ma was a nasty thing.  Ma told me too much.  But I wanted to say, "Go Mom!"
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Change to Michael's Point of View

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I was tired of disputing with Misty about Nelson.  It was really causing a lot of tension and stress.  Well, I just turned 45 years old, and Misty was still a young woman, about 35 years old.  Well, the average life span for men is 70 years, and I had used most of it up.  I still had a lot to do with my life that I hadn't accomplished.  I wanted two more children, and I wanted them before I turned fifty, so I can be sure to watch them grow up, and I could still be in great shape to play with them.  Misty didn't want any more children, but it was unfair to me.  She had three kids of her own, she was fulfilled, but I wasn't.  I decided to intentionally get her pregnant.

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Well, right after I'd expressed my passion to my wife, we heard a huge bang on our front door.  Misty was angry.  So she opened the door right away, ready to fight.  I was about to call the police.  It turned out to be Lydia's mother, and she sure didn't look well.  She started cursing at us, and calling Nelson names.

"I told your dog of a son to stay away from my daughter!"  she shouted. 
"They broke up like weeks ago."  Misty claimed.  "And I will kick your ass if you come over here, banging on my door like that again!"
"That 's why you are known as a tramp!"  Lydia's mom screamed.  "Did you get tested, Michael?"
"May I ask for your problem?"  I said, trying to break the heat.
"Oh, I just came to say that Lydia is pregnant, and Nelson is to never see that child."  Lydia's mom announced.  "I have legal papers to keep him away and everything."
"So you are going to let the poor baby not have a father?"  Misty asked.  "Are you stupid."
"Don't worry about that."  Lydia's mom replied.  "She is going to give it up for adoption, where a couple who wants a child may adopt it.  Nelson cannot talk to Lydia, nor see his baby.  It's a good thing.  Your son is already stupid, doomed to be a nobody in life.  He don't need teenage father on his title too."

That comment she made make the room hotter than Hell.  Misty blew her top.

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Misty charged towards her, hopped on her back, and kept on attacking the lady. 

"You are not going to get away with putting down my boy!"  Misty screamed.  "Check that little tramp of yours and make sure that baby is Nelson's.  What I'd heard from all the other kids is that your little tramp isn't that innocent!"

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I was scared, and in a corner.  I didn't know what to do.  I should had been a man and tried to break it up, but a smart man knows to never break up a cat fight.  Angry women has supernatural strength.  Especially the wife of a man.  I didn't want to get hurt.

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Misty kicked her butt hard, and that angry mom was out the house. 

"What are you going to tell Nelson?"  I asked Misty.
"Nothing.  It would break his heart."  she responded.  "What he don't know won't hurt him, and how is he sure it's his anyways?  I'll tell him when he becomes a man or something.  He would be heartbroken."

I wanted to say that it wasn't good for Nelson to not know, then if she told Nelson as a man, then he would only be more angry at this mother for holding the secret.  But I didn't want to get into it.  I was tired enough from Nelson.



 

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30-12-2008, 07:20 PM
Post: #55
Re: A Sims Story
Thanks for the update! im really diggin this umm simstory/legacy

I LOST MY SIGNATURE! No, Really I did. Sad

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And now you've got it back, along with your Kurt Cobain avatar! ;P
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30-12-2008, 08:00 PM
Post: #56
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The crazyness, the crazyness!

I'm not sure who's more messed up!  They're all screwy xD

Great stories, though!

Switching it up like that is awesome.

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30-12-2008, 08:20 PM
Post: #57
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So far, I think Michael is the only person who is mentally stable, excluding Rainy and the baby, since they are still young.

And when I read these stories, because I do not plan what I write, they remind me of someone I know...I just recognized that I know some really jacked-up people.

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30-12-2008, 08:22 PM
Post: #58
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Wow, fantastic story you got here! Tongue
Keep it up! {clap}

Hehe, signatures rhymes with pignatures. x3
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30-12-2008, 11:18 PM
Post: #59
Re: A Sims Story
(30-12-2008 08:20 PM)SuggieGlider link Wrote:So far, I think Michael is the only person who is mentally stable, excluding Rainy and the baby, since they are still young.

And when I read these stories, because I do not plan what I write, they remind me of someone I know...I just recognized that I know some really jacked-up people.

LOL

I think we all know at least one person like that.

I know I do ... lol

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31-12-2008, 04:39 AM
Post: #60
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Nelson has grown into quite a good-looking guy, it's too bad that he's not that smart and he got a girl pregnant, but he can work on that. Smile haha.

I think Misty needs to smarten up, but I doubt that'll happen. Haha.

But if those sims weren't like they were, this story wouldn't be as interesting.

Rainy looks adorable. Smile Her father was quite the ugly guy. Tongue I'm glad she didn't turn out like her father, so far. Haha. I think you should try to get an update in her point of view, so we can get to know her better. Let's just hope she doesn't turn out like her mother, and that Micheal was a good influence on her. Big Grin

Wouldn't you rather be strange and have a very exciting life then be completely normal and have an average life?
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