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A Pleasant Crisis (A short novel in process) :)
21-03-2009, 08:06 PM
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Re: A Pleasant Crisis (A short novel in process) :)
(21-03-2009 07:05 PM)MÅJIÇK link Wrote:"She's ... Murdered ..." or "She's ... BEEN Murdered ..."  ???

That is a little awkward ending o.o

Hmmm...thanks for the critism. I thought the same but I didn't bother to change it.

Anyways, I'll edit it. Smile

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<br /><br />Yeah, the friends that stuck together. We wrote our names in blood.
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