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21-03-2009, 11:50 PM
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Re: A Pleasant Crisis (A short novel in process) :)
No problem! Just the way you ended it, I can't tell if they're saying she's murdered someone, or she's been murdered ^^ lol As a writer myself I like to try and help others with polite criticism when I can :3
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