I Need some input for my sims video's!

[The Adam Diamond]

If you haven't seen Castaway's Conscience, see it, before you finish reading this post.

This happens to be a link. Click it to see the video.

Ok, well, it won the competition, but nobody really said anything about it, why they liked it, etc.

And since i'm gonna start making a few more videos, I need some constructive critisism.

So... Post!