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A Sims Story
07-02-2009, 08:54 PM
Post: #251
Re: A Sims Story
Joana's POV

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My mommy, sissys, and I moved into a new house.  It was a little more bigger than our old house.  It used to be that the old house was just all bed, now, it wasn't as much bed.  There was more than enough space to run and play.

But also, the family was getting too big, because Mommy had twins in her belly, and she just didn't want to get a new house, but there was no room!

So with her inheritance money, I guess that she'd gotten long ago, she bought a new house.

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Tatiyana was two years old.  She talked a little bit, and she could walk.  Uncle Nelson told me where babies came from, and I wanted to know who was my daddy.  Like who put the tadpoles inside of Mommy to get me.

"Mommy, who is my daddy?"  I asked. 

"I am your mommy and your daddy, I told you that."

"No!  Who is my real daddy!"

"Really, Joana, I forgot his name."

"What does he look like?"

"Well, he's a hispanic guy with black hair."

Yep.  My daddy was really gonna be easy to find. {glare}

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Mommy was meeting all our new neighbors.  "Watch mommy get pregnant by another one."  Belle groaned.  "I wish that I can live with Uncle Nelson!"

"Go live with him and his fifty kids!"  Bella screamed at her.  "I like mommy's house."

"Yeah, I like Uncle Nelson's house too."  I claimed.  "At least the kids don't have to fix themselves dinner there and he is on his kids."

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For like the first time, Mommy fixed lunch...a good one.  It was because she had a special guest over.  "We wanna have a good first impression on our new neighbor."  Mommy explained.

Mommy didn't join us for lunch, she was someplace upstairs.

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"You are only 5, Joana."  Belle explained.  "I known mommy for much longer."

"Do you know what my father looked like?"  I asked Belle.

"No way!  I don't even know who is my daddy!  I tend to try to get it out my mind.  Mommy don't know that people look at us bad.  All of the kids are teasing us, because we don't have daddies.  Then the grown folks don't want their kids over our house."

"That explains why Becky's mom didn't want her to come over." I mumbled.  "It isn't bad if mommy has guys around, right?"

"It's nasty though, and she gets mysteriously pregnant?"  Belle said.  "Watch another baby come because of this dude."

The poor dude had no idea what we were talking about.

"So are you all cousins or something?"  he asked.  The man had no idea we were sisters because the twins, me, and Tatiyana didn't look alike.

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The man soon went upstairs with mommy after eating.

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At that time, we were playing with our toys. 

But then, we heard noises.

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"I hate mommy!"  Belle started to cry.  "I can't stand her!"

Then she started cursing out loud and kicking the toys around.  Bella and I sat there and watched our sissy have her fit.  We were shocked and frozen.

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One afternoon after school, Lance came over.  Lance was supossed to get tutored by my sisters, who was smarter than him.  Lance had flunked the third grade, and he was really discouraged.  We personally thought he was stupid.  Uncle Nelson, I saw him work with Lance a lot on his homework and stuff, but I guess it didn't get through to him.

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Mommy soon had the babies.  And Uncle Nelson helped her bring them home.  He was gonna stay, but NaeNae was having a lot of problems.  He said something about NaeNae picking on the other kids, cursing all the time, hanging around boys that were older, and was just crazy and depressed.  He said her past was taking effect on her.  I had no idea about what was wrong with NaeNae.  Mommy told me she was adopted and that she had a bad father would would do all kinds of things to her.

Well, mommy had a boy and a girl--Julian and Jadien.  Their names were so cute and they matched!

Though Julian was a boy, mommy loved him, matter in fact, she was paying way more attention to him than Jadien, or any of us.  He had his own room and everything.

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Tatiyana wasn't her special baby anymore.  She was now unspecial enough to get licked by LeeLee.

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I wanted a cat for my birthday and Mommy bought me a cat!  I named her Queenie, because she was a fat cat...fed so much, like a queen.

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At first, I thought she was mean, but she was actually pretty playful!

I finally got what Belle meant.  I was tired of the babies!  All the twins and Tatiyana did was whine and cry!  It was getting on my nerves!

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07-02-2009, 10:29 PM
Post: #252
Re: A Sims Story
Wow, Amber is worst than Misty! Maybe they should give the kid up for adoption....

And Rainy had more kids xD Is she going to have more once the first set of twins are gone? lol

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07-02-2009, 11:45 PM
Post: #253
Re: A Sims Story
Here is another update today, I am so far behind where I actually am, and I have ideas, but I have to get these updates out the way.

So here is another one...I did an earlier one on Rainy today, if you didn't see that.
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I gotten out of bed to peek out the window and find Ashlee arguing with her boss/friend.  Both of them were really furious.  I really didn't know.  Could it had been job related?  I doubted that it could had been anything serious...Ashlee wouldn't betray her family.

I wanted to come out there to see what was the problem.  But it could had been none of my business, or it probably wasn't concerning me.  I was her husband, but I wouldn't want Ashlee in none of my personal affairs.

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Taj's early morning yelling caused me to stop focusing on Ashlee. 

"What do you want?"  I playfully greeted my little angel.

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She just needed a diaper change.

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That whole day, I was so curious, so that night, I just had to ask Ashlee.

"What were you and your boss talking about this morning?"

"Ah, just business matters.  You see, the economy is so bad, and the stock of the company just went down.  Then someone has been stealing money, and hey, um...I count the money every night, so he was wondering why haven't I been watching it."

"He thinks you stole the money?"

"He may...I mean, I do count it every morning and night, and lock up the cash register.  But I swear, I didn't do anything."

It was a pretty believeable story in my point of view.
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Lance's POV

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Daddy was really disappointed that I flunked the third grade...again.  I really felt dumb.  Then he invited Uncle Malcolm over...then they started talking about me. 

"Malcolm, how do you teach Michael Antonio?"
"Why do you ask that, Nelson?"
"Well, Lance flunked again, and I just need to learn some new methods of tutoring him."
"Well, Michael Antonio reads, and we make him sit down and do math problems and stuff.  We really don't do anything special.  He's just really smart, not the average kid."
"I just wonder...Lance is 11 years old...I mean...he is supposed to be in middle school.  Like I feel like I am doing something wrong."

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That night, Grandma came over.  Like she never came over our house.  I answered the door.

"Nelson?!"
"No, Grandma, it's me, Lance."
"Oh!  I'm so sorry!  You two look just alike!"
"Okay....?"
"So, where's the new baby?"
"Cypher's in the living room."
"Cypher?  I should spank your father for naming the baby such a stupid name!"

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Grandma spent the night over our house, which was okay to us.  But then, the next night, she was just standing outside, moping.  Xavier, NaeNae, and I were just sitting there, watching her.

"Is she gonna go home?"  Xavier questioned.  Then Daddy finally came to talk to her.

"What's wrong, mom?"  Nelson asked.  "You don't want to go home?"
"......"
"What's happening at the house?  Is Amber too much for you, because I can kick her out for you, if you can't."
"I just need some time away, Nelson.  Can I just stay over for a while?"
"You're sure that you don't want me to kick her out for you."
"It's okay, Nelson.  I just need some time away from her."

Daddy knew that Granny was getting old, and as he said, old people just cannot have a lot of stress.  He gave his spot up in the bed, so Grandma can sleep by Jennifer, while he slept on the sofa.

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NaeNae had gotten kicked out off summer school!  She was caught in the bathroom kissing this sixteen year old boy, and she was only 13.  I only gotten in trouble, because I was their lookout, but I didn't have a choice.  NaeNae was mean!

It wasn't the first time she'd gotten in trouble.  Once, she punched a pregnant teacher in the stomach, then she bullied this kid with this shrunken arm, then she would always have tantrums.  Sometimes, she would make me feel uncomfortable, like she would hug me a lot and tell me that I was cute. 

NaeNae was mad that everyone kept telling Dad that she was crazy and she needed help, but Dad didn't see that.  She acted like an angel in front of Dad.  Then she would always say Michael Antonio was cute, but he was a little kid, compared to her!

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Michael Antonio also came over that day, and NaeNae tried to kiss him, and he kicked her in the stomach and told Dad.

Michael Antonio told me that Dad didn't know what to say.

I thought that Dad knew that NaeNae was crazy, and that her past was taking effect on her.  I guess that a loving household wasn't enough.

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All Xavier and I talked about was NaeNae.  Then Xavier told me something about her.  He actually read her diary, and she had all our pictures in it. 

"You know NaeNae hears voices?"  Xavier told me.
"No way!"
"Yes way!  She said that it sounds like her mommy and other stuff...then some sound like her daddy."
"We need to show that to Daddy."
"So NaeNae would do something crazy?  No way!  Just leave her alone!"

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A year passed and Cypher had his third birthday!

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We all had undergone some changes.  NaeNae was fourteen.  And she really changed.  She was a nice looking girl, and had changed a lot...but she had gotten even crazier!  She was acting up towards us, but still acting all innocent around Dad and Jennifer.  Then, she would act all super nice to me, but there were those times when she was just really mean to me.

Under her bed, deep under her bed, she had books on how to become pregnant and parenting.  Then she had books on psychic readings and stuff.  She always spent her time in her room, sitting in the dark.

Dad said it was regular teenage stuff, but come on!  I thought he was scared of NaeNae himself.

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That wasn't all, NaeNae would always hold Cypher and feed him and stuff.

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I did a bit of growing myself.  I was no longer below my age.  The school district put me right into the grade I was supossed to be in, because it didn't look right...a teenage boy sitting in a third grade classroom.

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Also, another baby came.  Jennifer had another one.  Her name was Cecilia.  I was really happy for Dad.  I mean, he found the perfect woman...she sucked at decorating and cooking, but she was emotionally perfect for him, and he had two children.  I was his child too, but I didn't meet him until I was nine.

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Then another year and a half paseed, and Cypher turned five.  It was a life-changing experience.

Cypher just blew his candles and opened his present from Dad.  It was the same freaking shirt and jeans I had on!  I was like WTF!  Then I recognized something else!  Our freaking hair was like styled the same!

"I wanna be just like my big brother!" Cypher screamed.

Oh heck naw!  I then knew what I had to do!  I had to grow my hair!  I was not gonna be laughed at in public!  People pointing at the father and sons who looked just alike...not me!

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08-02-2009, 01:29 AM
Post: #254
Re: A Sims Story
Can someone remind me that i'm up to page 8?

It took me an hour to read up to that page. You update so frequently! I'd like to say, great story line! I'd never be able to think up of something so dramatic and interesting as this! Great work Suggie!
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08-02-2009, 04:11 AM
Post: #255
Re: A Sims Story
Wow!

Just ... wow.

So much is going on with your families, it's hard to keep them all together!  How do you do it? lol

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08-02-2009, 05:15 AM
Post: #256
Re: A Sims Story
Thanks for the compliments!

Really, I don't know how I keep them together.  The only name I seem to forget are their names, and where their houses are at in the small neighborhood.

But in a few more updates, there is gonna be a part 2, like a story made off of this.  Like it's gonna take place like a few years later, featuring Lance and Michael Antonio,

(The truth is that I couldn't wait to try out my AL, so I am doing them...but members from the family will still be featured, but the story is following those two.)

So it will be like a normal update, then a few years or so pass, and it's the story of those two.  But Lance would fill in the time gap, so don't worry.

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08-02-2009, 04:33 PM
Post: #257
Re: A Sims Story
Ooooo!

Sounds awesome Smile  I look forward to it, haha!

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08-02-2009, 04:39 PM
Post: #258
Re: A Sims Story
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Nine months later, Ashlee gave birth to a son, Kang.  Now, I was really unsure.  I mean, I believed in family planning...like all of our babies are planned out.  I don't remember trying for another baby, and we always took precautions, and were careful to not have another one.

Ashlee said, "Sometimes things happens out of the unexpected."

I really don't know.

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Our marriage was falling apart.  She would always spend her time in chatrooms, instead of talking to me, and I put more time than ever into my kids and my website.

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Taj', my little dumpling turned five, and was on her way to kindergarten for the first time.

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And Michael Antonio, yeah, he had the ladies all up on him.  The phone was ringing off the hook, and it was some girl, always wanting to know where Michael Antonio was at.

"Michael,"  I asked him one day.  "Are you doing anything with these girls?"
"Naw Dad," he responded.  "They just like me, and some of them are really nice girls, but I am not like that.  I was raised better than that."

Hopefully, he does not bring home any grandchildren soon, or get himself into any other kinds of trouble.

But I knew my son, he had a good head on his shoulders.

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When Kang turned two, I just couldn't see any resemblence, but all our children looked like their mother...none of them took after me.  The thing was that I didn't feel no father-son connection towards Kang.  It was like an invisible force.

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08-02-2009, 04:45 PM
Post: #259
Re: A Sims Story
Dun dun dunnnnnn ...

Taj' and Kang ... such interesting names!

And yeah ... Michael Antonio is soooo cute ^_^  I want him for my game!  lol

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08-02-2009, 04:46 PM
Post: #260
Re: A Sims Story
If you want, I can package his lot, and send it over.

Thing is he lives in an apartment...can we do that with tenants?....package their lots?

Then you can change his age.

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