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Whodunit? RP
09-11-2008, 05:08 PM
Post: #41
Re: Whodunit? RP
nichola died ollie

can someone please go now i posted last
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09-11-2008, 09:41 PM
Post: #42
Re: Whodunit? RP
I didn't want Mike to die so early. {ohmy}

But here goes...

Niall's P.O.V
Great now Mike is dead, it seemed all too sudden...

Chapter

"Mike...He's dead!" Princess shouted, a tear welling up in her eye.
Tears rolled down most of the groups cheeks and they snuggled together sobbing.
Brad and Niall stood motionless looking at the pool of blood, staining into the carpet.
There was only 7 left... Amber, Alisha, Niall, Brad, Princess, Ollie and Rena, one of them is the murderer.
Rena wiped the tears away with her top and walked over to Brad and Niall.
"I...can't..believe it. He's really dead...dead." Rena muttered sadly.
Amber and Alisha glanced at eachother, Ollie had a frightened expression on his face and Princess was still crying a bit.
Mike had his mouth wide open, looking like he tried to scream but nothing came out. He was defently dead.
The knife was jammed right in his back.
Mike was killed because someone tought he was a threat.
But Whodunit?

Hehe, signatures rhymes with pignatures. x3
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09-11-2008, 10:31 PM
Post: #43
Re: Whodunit? RP
im sorry niall Sad

Brads P.O.V
OMG Mike is dead! What a way to go. Stabbed in the back. The symbol of betrayal. And what pendant!? All I know is that it's not me. Maybe someone who Mike betrayed did it.

The Story
Brad went over to the body. " What is going on here!!" Brad exclaimed.
Rena was glaring at Brad. " I think YOU did it!!" she shouted at Brad.
" You guys!" shouted Amber. "Think about it, Brad and Niall were hunched over in a corner, Alisha Rena and me were at the top of the stairs, and Ollie was all the way across the room.
"Remember the voice?" Ollie said.
"I thought it was in my head," Brad replied.
"He wants Nichola's pendant," Rena said." I think that the pendant could be the answer to all of our questions.
"But Nichola never had a pendant, did she?" Amber asked.
"Mike would know, he has known her longer than any of us," Brad pointed out.
"That's why the murderer killed him!" shouted Rena.
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09-11-2008, 11:11 PM
Post: #44
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"The murderer knew we needed that pendant!" Princess fumed.
Niall had a angry face on and he looked at Ollie.
"Ollie, Do you know anything if Nichola had a pendant, you have a good eye for things." Niall asked, a serious tone on his voice.
"I saw her reach into her pocket a lot. Maybe thats were the pendant is stashed." Ollie explained quickly.
Niall rushed over to Nichola's body, lying behind one of the sofa's.
He put his hand into Nichola's left pocket and searched around.
He then put his hand in the oppisite pocket and did the same thing.
"Darn it, Nothing!" Niall yelled, thumping his hand on the floor.
Everyone groaned and settled back in their chairs.
Niall got back up and walked back over to the group.
There was no pendant that meant no case solved.
"Well I guess we have to live with it." Amber said after reading some books.
Alisha nodded and carried on to play her DS.
Princess was in the games room, playing some chess with Niall.
Brad, Ollie and Rena were drinking some Coca-Cola and talking in the parlour.
Suddenly, it started to rain and a cat hissing could be heard outside.
Rena swirled her drink around and stared at the window.
"Mike loved Coca-Cola..." Rena uttered.
Brad and Ollie sighed and carried their glasses out to the dining room.

Hehe, signatures rhymes with pignatures. x3
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10-11-2008, 10:09 PM
Post: #45
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No one's posting, I'll do another!

Suddenly, there was a mighty crash and screams.
Ollie and Brad dashed down the hall as fast as their legs could go.
Their shoes thudding loudly as they ran. Rena caught up with them and the trio slid into the room.
Amber and Alisha were up on the chairs, making scared cries and hopping from one foot to another.
"What the heck is going on?" Brad gasped, catching his breath.
"Bugs!" Alisha screeched, pointing down.
Three hairy spiders were on the ground, they were large.
Ollie grimmaced and stepped back. Rena also did this.
Brad grabbed a box and quietly smacked it down on them.
"It's alright." Brad said. "Phew, that was hella freaky." Amber yelled, hopping back down onto the chair with a plop.
Brad, Ollie and Rena walked back out and jogged up the stairs to sleep in one of the beds.
Princess and Niall just finished their game when rain started to spit at the windows.

Hehe, signatures rhymes with pignatures. x3
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10-11-2008, 10:11 PM
Post: #46
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They heard a smash.
"What's that?" Princess asked. "It sounded like it came from over there," The group walked over to a corner and saw a smashed pendant. It had Nichola's initials on it.
"This must be it!" Niall exclaimed nervously. "What could this mean?" All colour drained from Alisha's face.
"Ghosts," she managed.
"Somebody's been playing too many horror games," Amber teased.
"She could be right!" Rena said in a worried tone. "Ghosts!"

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10-11-2008, 10:16 PM
Post: #47
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For no reason, the light flickered off and a moan could be heard.
Everyone froze, they all felt like their legs wouldn't move.
"We need to find a flashlight or a candle." Rena suggested, looking at the group.
"I'm too scared!" Ollie shot back quickly, covering his eyes.
Princess and Alisha patted him on the back. "I can stay with him." Alisha volenteered bravely.
"Good idea. Niall, Me and Brad will go one way, Princess and Amber can go the other way." Rena replied.
They all nodded in agreement and set off to find light.

Hehe, signatures rhymes with pignatures. x3
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10-11-2008, 10:31 PM
Post: #48
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they came back with a candle. Alisha was holding Oliver as for he was knocked out."Alisha" Rena said."i Knew somthing like this would happen". It was not long until she realized alisha was knocked out to."Nichola here" Oliver said.Then Alisha said "whos next?"as they both woke up.

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10-11-2008, 10:40 PM
Post: #49
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Rena and Niall looked at eachother, a weird expression on both of their faces.
Princess sat into a chair, putting her feet up on the foot rest.
Another eerie moan floated into the room and it suddenly went cold.
"Did someone open a window?" Alisha asked, her voice shaking a bit.
"N-no." Rena gulped. A loud creek scared everyone.
"What was that?" Ollie squeaked.
"I don't know." Niall replied, looking into the hall.
Princess put her head in her hands. "I'm taking forty winks, wake me up in a while, ok?" Princess said tiredly.
"Ok, we will." everyone muttered, sounding sleepy themselfves.
It had been a long day, and soon enough, they drifted off.

Hehe, signatures rhymes with pignatures. x3
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10-11-2008, 10:50 PM
Post: #50
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they woke up by squeaking birds.They went into the kitchen and had breakfast.Oliver went outside to see the plane and check that there were no surviovors.While looking he fell on the floor and started screaming in pain. They ran strait to the plane."my leg my leg i think its broken"Oliver screamed.

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