A Pleasant Crisis (A short novel in process) :)

[sim323]

cant wait for the next update although i'm a little lost because you have me thinking
its really good

[yoshman9000]

Here's an update guys!

I was about to throw my computer across the room because it kept freezing.  {cursing} My computer is a piece of crap when it comes to multi-taking.

Part Three: The failure in my life

September 4th, 2008

The truth was that I’m more than just a light eater. I have an obsession with what I consume every day. My mom was worried for me the last few months. She asked me numerous times, “Why can’t you just eat?” I really don’t have an answer to that. I’ve tried to eat hundreds of times, but each time, I failed. It’s like when people have the flu, they don’t know why they can’t eat. My whole life is like I have the flu.
Straggling into my bedroom, I collapsed onto my bed. My thoughts went back to Heath. My mind was set back to the make out scene. He’s was in astonishing kisser. It must have been his first time though. His whole body was shaking like there’s no tomorrow. I sighed and got my cell phone out of my pocket. I needed to confront Heath and ask him what his problem was. Flipping open my phone, I dialed his number. “610-453-9403” One ring. Two rings. Three rings.
“Hello?”
“Heath, it’s me, Luke.” I waited for him to answer, but he didn’t say anything. My eyes glanced up at the ceiling. There was a tiny crack in the corner of the room. That crack had been there ever since my mom and I moved into this hell-hole of a house. The former owners had covered up the crack with floral wallpaper. When we moved in a year ago, we immediately ripped off the wall paper, and found the crack. My mom hasn’t gotten to fixing it yet. With her night job and her day job, she’s tired enough in between. I concentrated back on the *conversation*. Heath still was quiet. I took a long, hefty breath and said, “Why aren’t you saying anything?” Five solid seconds passed by.
“Because I’m really confused right now.”
“Confused about what?” I tapped my foot against my bedspread and took in a dreamful sigh.
“About what just happened.”
“When we kissed?”
“Yes. . .I’m confused about that whole event that went down.”
“What were you thinking when it happened?” A minuted went by with nobody speaking. Finally, he spoke up.
“I was thinking that I’m in love with you Luke.”

[phoebe91]

Wow, you make every post very dramatic xD Anyways, I love it!

[yoshman9000]

(05-04-2009 04:03 AM)Phoebe link Wrote:Wow, you make every post very dramatic xD Anyways, I love it!

Thanks Phoebe!

I'll hopefully be able to write within the next few days or so. It's spring break, so I'll have plenty of time.

[Ugly Von]

Looking nice

[yoshman9000]

Hey guys! I just wrote another one, but I unexpectingly had to go to my dad's house.

I'll get the update in ASAP.

[yoshman9000]

Sorry this update took forever guys. I wrote it four days ago, but didn't get to posting it on here. Anyhoo, enjoy and give feedback!

Part Four: A Diary Entry to My Love
September 4th, 2008
Dear Diary,
My life is falling apart. I just got back from the doctors. He said that I officially have anorexia. Now my mom has locked me in my room and said that if I don’t eat at least twice a day, I’m not going out. I’m in hell. I don’t know why I detest eating. Even though I’m going to despise following my mom’s rules, pursuing them will be the only key.
Heath told me that he thinks he’s in love with me. I’ve never been more confused in my life, and yet, I’ve never been so cheerful in my life. This feeling has never been felt by me before. I want to last as long as possible. My mind is spinning out of control. My legs are shaking out of control. My heart is beating out of control. I think that I really love him.
Now, with my other problem, I’m going to New Zealand in three days. I’m going to have to live with out the sight of my love, the feel of my love, and yes, the taste of my love. My brain can’t discontinue thinking about this one person, an angel, I keep imaging him as. I loath this, and at the same second, I adore this. Heath has to be in my presence as much as possible in the next three days. When I leave for my vacation, the only thing that I’ll be thinking about is him.
Luke Fallen
I closed my diary while lying on my bed. Too many thoughts were in my mind. I slowly and gradually, fell asleep.

[yoshman9000]

I wrote another one. Guys, the novel is ending soon. I'll start writing a sequel after that.

Enjoy!

Part Five: I have a second personality. It’s called anorexia.

September 5th, 2008

Dear Diary,
I haven’t left my room today yet because I only ate once. I’m trying my best to fight the appalling beast that is called anorexia, but at the same time, anorexia is my friend in some sorts. Heath hasn’t left my brain. Writing last night, I mentioned that I love him. That hasn’t changed. It’ll never change. I love him so much. An angel in the sky is him. He’s coming down to visit me, but something is in the way, anorexia.
As I’m writing this, a plate of tofu and vegetables is next to me. So far, I took two bites. Eight bites to go. I’m in hell. The devil might as well swift me away from this earth. He can leave my eating disorder here though. But if he leaves my eating disorder here, it’s like he’s leaving a part of me behind. I don’t want that to happen. Now I’m going insane. I’m writing about the devil taking me away! That is not like me at all!
There he is in my mind again, Heath. If I don’t see him today, I think I’m going to cry my eyes out all night. He’s became part of me and when he’s not with me, half of me is taken away. I have to finish this food. Five bites to go. Every time food enters my mouth, immense fear sets in and I think that I’m going to gain weight. I already think that I’m fat. My mom says all of the time that I’m skinny as anything, but deep down inside, I feel that she’s lying. Two bites to go. I can make it through this if I push. One bite to go.
Luke Fallen
            I took my last bite, and shoved my plate away from me. A piece of tofu bounced off the plate and jiggled onto my bed. Getting up, I took a step towards my door, but was surprised as I collapsed onto the floor. THUMP! My whole body was falling asleep. My eyes slowly blinked, and eventually, closed altogether.

I was fainting…

[phoebe91]

Interesting updates. It's amazing how you can get into their minds.