Connection (A short novel sequel in progress)

[yoshman9000]

(03-05-2009 05:28 PM)Yo! who ate my cheese!@ link Wrote:i didnt even see that coming!
I'd imagine the usual dina trying to just get him back

I didn't see that coming either...until I wrote it lol.

[yoshman9000]

Enjoy people!

Part Six: I’m joining her.

Dirk Dreamer

Flashback:

I never would have known how I died. No one knows how they’re going to die, but know how they’re going to live. I was a straight A student who was destined for greatness. My girlfriend, on the other side, was failing through school and was detested by almost everyone in school. Though she was a complete mess, I loved her with all my heart. Spending hours upon hours, I was thinking about her, my mind spinning out of control. She’s the most beautiful girl that I met and had an awesome personality.
I went through hell as when my dad told me that she had been murdered, I wanted to kill myself. Life isn’t working living without her. A window was open in my bedroom and the curtains were fluttering in the wind. The second I knew that she was dead; I wanted to jump out of the window and let the pain end. My first reaction was hollering at my dad, asking him how he knew that she no longer was alive. That was when he sat me down on my bed, and told me everything.
Lilith had been murdered right in front of my house. When he told me, my body felt as if I could just blow up. A puddle of salty tears was dripping on my bed. My dad had stared at me and told me that everything would be alright. I had gazed back at him and replied, saying that everything wouldn’t be alright. He then told me that I was allowed to see Lilith’s dead body before the police would arrive. I nodded and amble out of my bedroom door and down the stairs. My hand shook as I slowly opened the front door and saw my terror. The love of my life had been killed and was lifelessly lying in front of me. A gun had been lying next to her, gleaming in the moonlight. I fell on my knees and covered my face in my hands. Letting out the most deafening screech in my life, I spotted the gun next to Lilith. An idea popped in my head and I got up from my knees, walked towards the gun, picked it up, aimed it towards me, and shot myself right in the head. Blood spattered everywhere and painted the dark green grass red. My eyes were widening and I fell towards my right side and starred at the silent night street. Those were the last few moments of my life…

[Majick]

Wow ... talk about sudden ... I feel horrible for their families!  But good stories, just the same.

[yoshman9000]

Part Seven: My last moments (Final Chapter)

Luke Fallen

My life is taken
I am no longer alive.
My body stays
But my soul goes.
I have been shot
In the head
By a total stranger
The blood was splattered
All over the ground
And slowly
My life was taken away
Now as I’m wasting away
My lover
Is committing suicide
He has shot himself
In the head
His sparkling blue eyes
Are starring at me
And salty tears
Are draining down his cheeks
His hands
Are embracing my hands
And holding for dear life
I will never depart him
I will be with him forever
As its better to die together
Than live apart
I know this is hard on us
But it’s for the best
We are dying
But we’re with each other
That’s really what matters
The love for this person
That has turned my life upside down
I despise him with a burning passion
But I love him with a burning passion
Now as I rest
And wait for my pulse to stop
I am with the love of my life
I will never leave him
Ever again



Part Eight: Unraveling secret

One by one
Everyone will die in the world
And they have no idea
That they're under control

Suicide
Murders
Drownings
And lies being told

Death itself

[yoshman9000]

So that's it.

It all unravels. 

[sim323]

ahh! poetry my brain!!~ it-its thinking!! lol
nice little story

[phoebe91]

Everyone's dying/dead xD

Great story though!