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10-03-2013, 10:24 AM (This post was last modified: 10-03-2013 10:24 AM by Ollie.)
Post: #31
RE: Fury
I can only see something terrible happening in this relationship.

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10-03-2013, 11:21 AM
Post: #32
RE: Fury
Mike's real fear is that no longer weedy Kevin's now going to come round & kick his ass! Biggrin

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10-03-2013, 12:16 PM
Post: #33
RE: Fury
And/or steal his girl!
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10-03-2013, 08:47 PM (This post was last modified: 15-05-2015 04:18 PM by Fraroc.)
Post: #34
RE: Fury
Here's a funny chapter for you Smile

Chapter Nine

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The leaves were crunching as two horses walked down the path, It was just three days after Karilla and Mike’s first date. For the first time, Mike felt like he had a true soulmate and Karilla finally had a boyfriend that she can connect with on a personal level, mostly due to their mutual love for horses. As Mike rode Fury and Karilla rode Raven down the path, Karilla thought it would be a good time to strike up a conversation with her new boyfriend.

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“When was the first time you ever rode a horse?”
“Oh God..Do I really have to tell you?"
"Come on!!!"
"Alright, alright....It’s a pretty funny story actually. Back in 2006 when I was eighteen years old and a young and athletic studly kind of guy, I was dating the homecoming queen from my high school, and like you, she loved to ride horses. One summer night, Me, my girlfriend and another friend of mine were walking home from this huge party and we were still slightly buzzed from the drinking we did. We were smart enough NOT to get behind the wheel of a car, mind you. And on the way back home, we passed the horse farm where she kept her horse. And one thing led to another....

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“Yo, look man...It’s a horse.”
“No DUH!! That’s where I ride!”

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Mike hopped the fence and approached the large, already-saddled Palomino gelding, admiring it’s size and stature. It is then where Garry, Mike’s friend gets an idea, to the chagrin of Jessica, Mike’s current girlfriend at that time.

“Yo Mike I have an idea, If you got on the horse and I took a picture and put it on MySpace, man just think of everybody thinking how badass you look on a horse!”
“Michael, don’t.”

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“Don’t do what?”
“You know damn well what I’m talking about.”
“Don’t not ride this horse?”
“Who do you think you are, The Lone Ranger?”
“OK! OK! I won’t not ride it! PSYCH!!”

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Doing a quick double take, Mike swiftly mounts the horse and spurs, not knowing what he’s exactly getting himself into....


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Following Mike’s spur, the horse immediately springs into a swift canter.

“Ok Clint Eastwood, you had your fun, now get off of the horse!”

In the distance, she hears a rather humorous scene concerning Mike and the horse.

“Ok boy, slow down. Slow down! SLOW DOWN!!!!!! OH F***!”
“This can’t be good.”

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The horse races by Jessica and Garry, totally out of control with Mike struggling to stay in the saddle.


“Damn it, I did NOT sign up for this when I started dating him...”

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Jessica and Garry walked to the stable, lamenting on what an impulsive idiot Mike can be.

“God, Mike is such a dumbass. He’s never been on a horse before, what makes him think he can ride like some cowboy?”
“I don’t know, Jessica. That’s just the way Mike’s always been. He’s always taking risks, always upping the ante, he’s a born daredevil, I guess. He ain’t afraid to do anything!”

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“So this is the stable that I ride at usually. And right there on the hitching post is my horse!”
“Wow, cool.....I wonder if Mike figured out how to stop that horse by now...”

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Almost on cue, Mike and the horse blaze by once again.

"Obviously not" Garry whispered to Jessica...
“Come on Mike, you handled the roller coasters at Six Flags Elitch Gardens just fine!”

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Jessica mounted her horse on the hitching post.

“Come on, girl. Let’s go save my stupid boyfriend.”

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She then galloped the horse parallel to Mike, still barely hanging on for dear life on the saddle and with one push; Mike tumbled off the horse’s back and landed face first onto the ground.

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“THANK YOU!!! Ow....”

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Grogilly, Mike rose from the ground, dazed, confused, but otherwise uninjured. As Jessica rode her horse up to Mike, Garry ran to his best friend.

“So, Mr. Cowboy. Have you learned your lesson?”
“Yes, MA’AM.”
“But I must give you credit, Mike. None of my past BFs were willing to ride horses. So, I’m glad that at least you made the effort....”

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"Bullsh*t. I do not believe that for a second."
"Karilla, I swear to God that really happened."
"That was a pretty funny story though. And your GF was right. Sadly,with this whole "pretty pony" image, horseback riding is really becoming a "girls only" hobby, not a lot of guys are willing to get into the saddle nowadays."
"Hey! I'm a guy!"
"I know that! Guys that ride still exist, but not as much as they used to unfortunately. What happened between you and Jessica anyway?"
"Oh you know....we broke up before graduation after a huge fight...I don't really think we were meant for each other relationship-wise. I mean, we met at some high school party for chrissakes. With all of the illegal things going on like underage beer pong, and weed smoking, It wasn't exactly a romantic setting.......I feel that we're much more compatible...."
"You really think that, do you?"

"I don't think. I know"
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10-03-2013, 09:56 PM
Post: #35
RE: Fury

Yes, horses can detect an idiot on them from the start, & act accordingly!

Was this the point onward where Mike learned that the correct way to deal with horses was to expose his hairy chest to them first so they felt a bond with him? Biggrin

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11-03-2013, 10:17 AM
Post: #36
RE: Fury

Ah, those crazy kids!
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11-03-2013, 10:28 PM (This post was last modified: 15-05-2015 04:37 PM by Fraroc.)
Post: #37
RE: Fury
Chapter Ten

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Mike’s boots made a soft padding sound on the floor of the dormitory hallway. Having never been to college, he had no idea what it was like to live inside of a dormitory....He walked across the hallway of dorm section D to find the room where Kevin Schaefer was assigned.

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He found the dorm room that his younger brother lived in, and knocked on the door.

“I really hope this works, Karilla...” Mike whispers to himself.

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The door opened and an athletic, muscular, strapping young gentleman awnsered it. Mike simply couldn't believe how much his brother has changed. A scrawny frame replaced with a muscular body, a baby face replaced with a small beard on the chin and facial stubble, almost a mirror image of Mike. The young man looked at his with both surprise and scorn.

“Michael? What the hell are you doing here?”
“Just decided I'd drop by and say ‘hi’ to my little brother....” Mike sheepishly said.
“Tell you what, why don’t you come in and think of a better excuse?”

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“So, what do you want from me Mike? You want to beat the sh*t out of me again? I'm warning you now, I can fight back.”
“What do you want to do? Call me a freak? Or a loser?”

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THEN WHY THE HELL ARE YOU HERE FOR CHRIST'S SAKE!? I thought I told you I wanted nothing to do with you anymore! After the way you treated me all of my goddamn f***ing life! You know what I really, REALLY wanted? It’s NOT popularity and it’s NOT having a smokin’ hot girlfriend.”
“What is it, Kevin?”

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Those words that came out of Kevin’s mouth cut Mike like a knife. It was the unvarnished truth that he already knew, but still, it hurt.

“Kevin......I......I.....................................I’m sorry.....”
“You’re what?”
“I said that I’m sorry.”
“That’s....the first time you ever said that to me....”
“ little man....The whole reason why I came to visit you was to tell you that I’m not that person anymore. And I would like it would accept me as your big brother once more....The way I acted when we were kids...f***ing unforgivable....”

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Kevin is taken aback. He now sees a side of his big brother who constantly bullied him and made him feel worthless that he never saw in his life. A GOOD side. Kevin still had trouble believing his “transformation” but he was willing to give him a chance.

“Alright.....why don’t we have a little bit of a talk?”

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“So Kevin, I see you’ve been working out!”
“A lot, actually. The girls around here seem to really dig muscular guys, so I decided to start watching my diet and working out 3 hours a day. It's really paid off...”
“And I always remembered that you never were able to grow facial hair and you never had to shave...How'd that happen?”
“I guess that I had one final puberty spurt when I turned 19. So tell me about what you’ve been up to...”
“Well.....I’ve cleaned myself up. I’m no longer drinking or partying and I've been sober for a month now. After I stopped drinking, I got a job at a local horse stable.”
“You work with horses?”
"I guess that explains why you're wearing cowboy boots..."

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“I also wanted to give you this gift. It's a picture of me and my girlfriend. That’s me on the horse, and on the ground over there is my girlfriend, Karilla.”
“Wow...she’s really is pretty, really hot actually....”

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“So Mike......I assume that you ride horses regularly?”
“Yes I a problem with that?”
“Not really, but isn’t horseback riding last century? And the last time I saw you, you were thinking about getting a car.”
“Car? I hate cars. It’s either horses or motorcycles for me!”

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“And also...I broke that horse.”
“You broke him? Like a bronco at a rodeo?”
“Kind of....but it wasn’t as physical. Fury was a very dangerous and an aggressive horse, but I slowly earned his trust and.....I may have had many friends over the years....but Fury I have to say, is my best friend.”
“Your best friend is a horse......somehow that makes a lot of sense with you.”
“I’ll take that as a compliment, city boy!”

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“Mike....It’s like I’m meeting you for the absolute first time of my life....All I have to say is...thank you...”

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“Don’t sweat it, come here and give your big bro a hug!”

Kevin and Mike embraced in a tight, friendly bear hug. Signifying the renewal of their relationship.....and soon after, Mike left the dorm room with a promise of reunion.

Mabye you'll see Mike Schaefer's little brother Kevin return in a future chapter Smile
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12-03-2013, 09:53 AM
Post: #38
RE: Fury
Kevin is very forgiving! I'd be more likely to have opened the door, thrown a punch that would break Mike's nose, then closed the door again.

Kevin should get down to the stables, there's a couple of girls going spare there and they seem keen on muscular guys!
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12-03-2013, 08:30 PM (This post was last modified: 15-05-2015 04:53 PM by Fraroc.)
Post: #39
RE: Fury
Caspin: "Kevin should get down to the stables, there's a couple of girls going spare there and they seem keen on muscular guys!" Well...let's just say this chapter will introduce another male character coming to the stables Smile

Chapter 11

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Karilla was SO freaking bored.

It was already the late afternoon and she had absolutley ZERO obligations to do. Without anything else going on, she decided to do something that is her absolute passion, the reason why she spent days on end at the stable, Take Raven out for a ride.

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Karilla then put the saddle on Raven’s back and tightened the girth strap around the horse’s belly...

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When suddenly, she heard a loud noise that alerted her and Raven. It was the stray cat that had made its home in the hay loft. It had decided to go hunting for rats and ran out of the stable, knocking over a pail and a broom.

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Raven suddenly goes into a frenzy, she rears up and bucks wildly, akin to how Fury acted before Mike’s arrival. Karilla tried in vain to calm the Buckskin/Andulasian mare down.

“Easy girl, it’s just the stray cat!!!"

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But it’s too late; Raven attacks Karilla by kicking her, breaks down the door to the stable and canters away, after the stray cat.

“RAVEN, COME BACK!!!! Damn it! I have to ask Jack to do something about those cats making their home in the hay loft!!!!”

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Jack was out giving Buddy his exercise, so riding the first horse she ever rode at the stable before her and her family bought Raven wasout of the question. For an unknown reason, there was a pact between the three girls forbidding them from riding each other's horses. She then spotted her boyfriend's horse in his stall, thinking that being Mike's girlfriend earns her extra trust points, she let Fury out and tried to ride him, but Fury had other plans.

“Listen Fury, Raven escaped the stables and I need to ride you so I can catch her. You’re the only horse that’s fast enough and....DON’T YOU SNORT AT ME!!! Hey!! Stop biting at me!!!! FINE!!! I’ll get Mike!

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“I’m right here, babe. What’s up?”
“We have to take Fury out! Raven ran away from the stable.”
“What? Why?
“I’ll tell you while you’re riding!”

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Mike then mounted his best friend with Karilla walking next to him on foot.

“So what happened, exactly?”
“Well, for starters. I’m not sure if Raven is a horse or a Golden Retriever with hooves and a black mane and tail. She LOVES to chase after things like cats, squirrels and rabbits, and I bet that I can play fetch with Raven if I wanted to. I love Raven with all my heart, but I swear she is too stupid for her own good.”
“Ha ha!!! a dog horse!”
“That’s basically Raven for ya.”
“Wait...look all the way in the distance.....there's a horse! It has a saddle....but no rider, That’s gotta be Raven!
"We have to get her!
"Climb on, Karilla and hold on tight!”

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Karilla jumped on Fury in tandem with Mike as he kicked the stallion’s side and springs into high-gear. Karilla and Mike begin to chase after Raven......

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But what Mike and Karilla don’t that there was another rider pursuing Karilla’s horse.

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Mike and Karilla was just about to reach Raven....That was when seemingly out of nowhere, another man, approximatley Mike's age riding a horse galloped out of the shadows in front of Mike and Karilla. What they saw absolutely amazed them. The horse the young man was riding was probably the most stunning, mesmerizing, and gorgeous black Friesian stallion that Mike or Karilla ever seen. And the man riding the horse had looks that could give Chris Hemsworth or Matt Bomer a run for their money. A wide, pronounced chiseled jaw line, well-styled hair, facial stubble, and a deep, soothing voice that could give anyone, male or female an ear-orgasm. And he was incredibly built, with large muscles that bulged from his long sleeved shirt. Karilla was absolutley stunned. However, Mike was a little distrustful of the rider.

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“Listen, bro. I have 12 years of MMA under my belt, if you even THINK of hurting my girlfriend’s horse in any way. I won’t hesitate to KICK YOUR ASS, you got that, BUB?“
“I.....just saw this horse with a saddle but without a rider.....and I wanted to see who it belonged to. I mean no harm to anyone, ok? My name is Jason Weiss.”
“I’m Karilla Johnson, and this is my boyfriend, Mike Schaefer, Nice to meet you!”

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Mike dismounted Fury and went down to shake Jason’s hand.

“I'm sorry that I snapped at you, We got off on the wrong foot.”
“Don’t sweat it, pal! Do you guys ride around here?”
“Yes we do actually, there’s some horse stables not far from here.”
“That’s actually perfect timing! I was interested in some work.”
“Well.....You’ve met the right people! One of our stable hands had just quit a few days ago so there is a slot open!”

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Mike, Karilla and Jason ride their horses back to the stables, where Jennifer is hanging out. She already knows that Mike is going steady with Karilla and that option was now gone, but everything changes when she feasts her eyes on the handsome man on the black stallion, Jason Weiss....

“Hey Karilla and Mike!!! who’s this guy?”
“Jason, This is one of my best friends in the whole wide world, Jennifer Bettencourt. This is Jason Weiss, he is thinking about getting a job as a stablehand!”
“Hello, Jennifer! Can I call you ‘Jenny’?”
“Well, everybody else calls me that, I don’t see why not...”

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After meeting Jason, Jennifer immediately whips out her cell phone and called Marissa, who is at the local shopping mall with some other friends of theirs.

“Marissa?! O.M.G the absolute BEST thing just happened to me!!!”
“Take a chill pill, Jenny! What happened!”
“I just met ANOTHER Oh my God, SUPER MUY CALIENTE guy that rides horses!!!”
“No. Way.”
“What’s his name?!”
“His name is Jason. He is soooooo freakin’ sexy and cute it’s not even funny. Just take all of the hot celebs that you have a crush on, like....Joe Manganiello from True Blood.
“The werewolf? Yeah! He’s so hot!”
“Well, imagine him like times hotter and you got the guy I saw today!! and guess what? He’s thinking about WORKING at the stables!”

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Later that day, Mike went up to find Jason hanging out by the corral. Still angry at himself for threatening to beat him up when he first met Jason ( step backward in his book when it comes to his attitude) he found this as the perfect opportunity to apologize to him and hopefully formulate a good friendship, a “bromance” between them.

“Hey Mike! What’s new?”
“I...just wanted to say that....I’m sorry I threatened to kick your ass when I first met you. You really seem like a nice guy and....I would like to be your friend...”
“Hey, don’t sweat it! Nobody’s perfect, man. Oh and by the way, thank you for giving this job opportunity to me, it means a lot to me. You know....Even though growing up in a wealthy family can get pretty annoying after a while with all of the formal affairs and keeping the family name pristine; it does have some perks! like my riding skills. I’ve basically been riding horses since by the time I learned to walk and in high school? Fugghetaboutit! handsome, muscular, rich, rides horses. I was every girl’s dream boyfriend. A lot of the guys on the football team were a bit jealous, I’ll tell you that!”

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“I forgot to mention this to you before. Jason, that black horse of yours is......INDESCRIBABLY beautiful.”
“Thanks dude, His name is Dante and he’s a nine year old Friesian stallion, and he’s my absolute best friend. I feel as if when you bond with an equine, you have a friend for life.”
“That’s definitely true with my horse, Fury. Sometimes I feel like Fury is my only true friend. I guess he knows I saved his life. Fury was a very dangerous and wild horse who killed his previous owner by stomping him to death. When I first encountered him, he was deemed a danger to himself and to others and he was scheduled to be euthanized by the animal cops. I guess the reason why I even tamed him to begin with was because he was such a beautiful creature and I didn’t want him to die, and as a result....this beautiful friendship started because of that.”
“That’s....scarily similar with Dante. Because Dante’s a stallion, stallions are much more aggressive and spirited than mares or geldings. However, Dante didn’t kill his previous owner, thank God. He unfortunately did brutally attack and kill other stallions on his previous owner’s stud farm. It's not uncommon for stallions to fight over a mare, but Dante was just brutal. He even broke a rival stallion's ribs once! I think the reason why Dante was such a violent horse was because the owner of the stud farm didn't train him well at all and as a result, he was the first stud to be sold. I think it was four years ago today when I was still in high school when I discovered him at a horse auction for sale. He was quarantined, and like your horse, was also declared a danger to himself and others and was going to be put down. But the way he would thrash around in the steel holding pen, rearing and bucking at the door, I wasn't scared of him, Instead I was just mesmerized by his spirit and beauty...I made my decision to buy the black stallion and my parents thought I was mental. My folks were TOTALLY against me buying the black stallion and were already considering buying me a prized chestnut mare, but I just felt this connection with Dante. My parents were totally prepared to hire all these horse trainers to break Dante, but I managed to tame him all by myself.....and as a result, it’s like I said earlier.

Once your bond with an equine, you have a friend for life...."
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12-03-2013, 09:49 PM
Post: #40
RE: Fury
(12-03-2013 08:30 PM)Fraroc Wrote:  Mike then mounts his best friend.

Aye caramba!

(12-03-2013 08:30 PM)Fraroc Wrote:  She already knows that Mike is going steady with Karilla and that option was now gone, but everything changes when she feasts her eyes on the handsome man on the black stallion, Jason Weiss....

Very fickle, these young ladies, aren't they!
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