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Trusting Desire - An American Historical Romance!
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16-06-2014, 08:04 PM
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RE: Trusting Desire - An American Historical Romance!
Thank you so much everyone!
Missdbug - So glad you're enjoying the comic-style story. I love the attention-grabbing "fast-pacedness" of it all (though it does take up a lot more time snapping photos). Haha, Caspin, you crack me up with you're "no doubt I'm reading too much into it" about Becky! I wish I could give all the harlots crazy ulterior motives and more drama, but alas, they are but teeny tiny, not-too-important characters compared to the entire story. Minty - I though the "chomp" would be a nice touch, leading the reader to imagine whatever their heart desires about what Ellie's thinking. And don't worry, Gabriel will come around very, very soon. ![]() Hoping to post Chapter 3.1 tonight! |
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17-06-2014, 05:51 AM
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RE: Trusting Desire - An American Historical Romance!
Chapter 3.1 is up, ya'll. It's kind a short one, so I apologize ahead of time! If I hadn't split it into two, I might have pulled my hair out, LOL.
![]() ![]() ![]() http://trustingdesire.wordpress.com/chapter-3-1/ |
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18-06-2014, 09:44 PM
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RE: Trusting Desire - An American Historical Romance!
Oh my. I didn't recognise Ellie in the first picture because of her new dress! Certainly looking the part now isn't she, poor thing. I hope that Gabriel is going to bust Jasper's face at some point.
Looking forward to the next instalment! ![]() |
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21-06-2014, 10:22 AM
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RE: Trusting Desire - An American Historical Romance!
I think a snap chapter was needed to get that interlude done, it wouldn't have fitted in the last chapter & would have made for an awkward start to the next one. But it still gave us another extra bit of background to the story in Ellie & Gabriel knowing one another from the very distant past.
More! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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23-06-2014, 04:58 AM
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RE: Trusting Desire - An American Historical Romance!
Hey guys! Chapter 3.2 is up, and boy is it craaazy!
![]() http://trustingdesire.wordpress.com/chapter-3-2/ |
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23-06-2014, 07:40 AM
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WOW! That was an intense update!
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23-06-2014, 05:42 PM
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RE: Trusting Desire - An American Historical Romance!
HA! I know, right?
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23-06-2014, 09:17 PM
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Oh dear! That wallpaper in the hall! Seriously good saloon-y pattern.
Gabriel should go with her! Or she should stay with him! And for the love of pancakes, won't someone please take the opportunity to shoot Jasper in the balls?! |
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28-06-2014, 11:51 PM
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RE: Trusting Desire - An American Historical Romance!
Wowsers! What a chapter! You don't skimp on the action, do you?
I'm going to have to be careful what I say here in case I spoil it for anyone that's not read it yet, but talk about the cavalry arriving in time! Very surprised he stayed, but suppose that would have been too obvious a plotline & leaves it hanging when or if he appears again. Can I ask how you are getting those speech balloons? I've seen the same on Archivist's funny stories - are they from photoshop or a graphic manipulation package? ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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29-06-2014, 07:42 AM
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RE: Trusting Desire - An American Historical Romance!
Thank you! Haha I know, chapters 1-3 are chock full of action! After that I assure you it calms down quite a bit. I'm trying to follow the plot line of my novel closely, so whatever happens in the comic happens in the story as well, hence the more complex plot line.
I actually was inspired by the look of those funny stories to make my own comic! I actually use a program called Comic Life. The trial version still had a bunch of features, but I bought the full version as an investment. I'm pretty certain that's what Archivist uses too. I love it! |
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