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yoshman9000 · (This post was last modified: 06-09-2008 02:52 AM by yoshman9000.)

Well...here it goes... {clap}

Dan found a strange letter in his mailbox
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But not soon later did he find out that it was from Cheryl Ku, Vincent's girlfriend
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When Vincent got home from school...

Dan: How was school?
Vincent: It was fine
Dan: So I was thinking that we all could go out tommarow to do something.
Vincent: To do what?
Dan: Oh maybe go bowling...go something to eat...visit your mom's grave...
Vincent: ...
Dan: I know it's hard on you Vincent...but...
Vincent: I know she's in a better place now...
Dan: So ehh... OH MY GOD IT'S JIM'S BIRTHDAY TODAY!!!
Vincent: Don't worry I talked to him, he wants a quiet birthday at home.
Dan: Oh okay...thanks...son...

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When Jim got home from school...

Vincent: How was School
Jim: Ok
Vincent: So exited about your birthday!
Jim: Oh yesss
Vincent: Than lets go!

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So when everyone was outside, Jim blew out his candles.

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After Jim grew up they all had some cake together

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Later that night...

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Well that's it for the first part hope you like it! 8)

yoshman9000 · (This post was last modified: 06-09-2008 02:53 AM by yoshman9000.)

Comment Please! Smile

chelikins · 06-09-2008, 06:10 AM

You have a very good start. I cannot wait to see more of you characters so I can really get to know them. Keep up the good work !!

yoshman9000 · (This post was last modified: 06-09-2008 03:16 PM by yoshman9000.)

UPDATE: Ottamos

David Ottamos was relaxingin his house for a while till a disturbance came.

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Samantha came running down the steps. She approached David.

Samantha: What do you think your wearing?
David: Clothes
Samantha: Don't get smart on me...You better go up to your room and change your clothes!

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David hated sharing a room with her sister and her grandmother.

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Instead of changing his clothes he just relaxed on his bed.

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Samantha came back to his room to see if he changed his clothes:

Samantha: I said for you to change your clothes!
David: Well I didn't...
Samantha: You know what? Your grounded!
David: YOU CAN'T GROUND ME YOU EVIL WHORE!

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David run down the steps and out the house.

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And drove off in sadness...

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b1245p · 06-09-2008, 04:31 PM

That was a good update, keep going Smile

yoshman9000 · 08-09-2008, 08:18 PM

I will but I can't until I'm at my dad's house because the data is on the computer there. Sad

phoebe91 · 11-09-2008, 08:52 PM

Those are nice starts! I can't wait to see more ^^

yoshman9000 · 13-09-2008, 05:02 PM

--The Linkin Family--

Molly stood outside holding her daugter, Kira Linkin. Molly has been worried about her late pregnancy with her third child. Or could it be third AND fourth? Will she have twins or not?

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She cried thinking of how hard it will be on her.

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When her came home from school her did his homework as usual

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When he was done with his homework, he did the one thing he has been nervous about...asking Marsha Bruenig out

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She said she would love to go out on a date with him! So since they didn't have a car, he had to use a taxi.

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And this is Marsha when they got there.

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When they got out of the taxi, Ricky made his move. Awwwwwww

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So after sucking face, they went ice skating!

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More making out

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Going steady

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Hmmm...XD

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When he got home he, of course, snuck out!

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And that very morning...Labor Pains!

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Happysimsdude · 13-09-2008, 05:33 PM

Great story,Keep up the good work!

yoshman9000 · 19-09-2008, 01:48 PM

(13-09-2008 05:33 PM)Î·Î¹Î±ââ Î¹Ñ âÎ¹ÑÑÏÑÐ²Ñâ Ï.Ï link Wrote:Great story,Keep up the good work!

Thanks next time I have an update, I'll hopefully have better quality pictures.