This is life?! RP

[Happysimsdude]

Here is a fun RP that could not star us! {woot}

A brutal punch,a deveastating kick to the ribs,Shannon was hurled to the ground.
Shannon Emmet was a 12 year-old school girl in 1st year of Secondary School.
She was in a fight in a mosh pit.A girl named Ciara stood with a evil grin across her face.
Shannon was pushed into a fight by her older brother,Conrad.Shannon was laying on the muddy path,with a huge bruise above her eye.She was ambushed by Ciara Murdock and was kicked to the ground.Ciara tossed her hair and pounced on Shannon,pinning her to the ground.Shannon's muscles tightened as Ciara grasped and tugged at her hair.Shannon let out a scream and a tear welled up in her eye.Suddenly,Shannon got a rush of strenght.Her arms felt powerful as she prised Ciara out of her grip.She slammed her fist into Ciara's chest and exclaimed a cry of anger.
Ciara gasped as Shannon punched her and then trusted her head against the ground.
Conrad tried to pull her off Ciara but Shannon kneed Ciara in the gut.
Ciara was knocked out and breathing heavy.Before any more damage has brought,Conrad pulled Shannon away.

[Lauren411]

im confused............... {unsure}