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Whodunit? RP
02-11-2008, 09:51 PM
Post: #11
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well it is insteresting to me its just no one was posting and so i keept editing my post and  this rp goes quick its not one that  goes on forever!

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03-11-2008, 08:15 PM
Post: #12
Re: Whodunit? RP
Let's go f/the ketchup packet scene again?

"I'll get that!" Mike called and ran to open it. Alisha rushed in.
"It's soaking out there!" she shouted. The group all rushed to sit around the fire.
But then, something strange happened. A knife emerged from a pocket and quickly fired right into Nichola's chest.

The police arrived and saw the anxious, innocent looking group.
"Dead," the doctor proclaimed. "Absolutely dead,"
"Whodunit?" one of the policemen asked between mouthfuls of donut.
"The files..." Sergeant Ned mumbled and opened the book on their pages.

Here, the mystery begins. Whodunit? That's the question.

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03-11-2008, 09:35 PM
Post: #13
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"I've been here five minutes and someone dies! Let me out!" Alisha yelled, hurtling to the door.
She grasped the handle and tugged it hard, but it didn't budge. They were locked in.
"Now what?" Alisha groaned, slamming a wet hand against the door.
"I'm going to bed, this is too freaky!" Mike shouted as he walked into the hall.
But before he could get there, Rena interupted with "And why are you leaving, I say you killed Nik!".
"Me?, I think your covering up your act of murder!" Mike accused menacinling.
"Everyone stop!" Brad bellowed. "Stop this nonsense!"
Everyone stared at Brad now, their eyes narrowing suspiously.
"Guys?" Brad eyes widened.
"YOU DID IT!" Mike and Rena screamed. " Oh for the love of.." Niall said agrily.
But before he finished a piece of paper flew down the hall.
Niall catched up and read it, it said

NICHOLA, OLLIE, PRINCESS

They all gasped.

Hehe, signatures rhymes with pignatures. x3
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04-11-2008, 01:56 AM
Post: #14
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another paper came and said

htaed stiawa rof uoy

"what could that mean?" they said."read it backwards it says death awaits for you" Niall read out loud.the manshion darkend and a gust of wind blew over them.The bathroom light turnd on they could hear water rush...

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04-11-2008, 09:23 AM
Post: #15
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Eeek! I didn't see the RP section! Like, :O! Okay, here it comes! But don't choose the murderer, 'cause I have the best idea for who it could be Wink

Rena's P.O.V
This is really creepy. I didn't WANT to accuse anyone, but I don't anyone thinking it was me. But, it wasn't me. I've been accused. Ughh, or ... did I do it? I doubt it. I think i'd know if I did it or not. It could be anyone that was in the room. There are six of us here, now, after Nichola's death. Six suspects ...

Back to everyone's view
Amber stared at the dead body, closing her eyes in disgust. Oliver shot a glance at Amber, and rolled his eyes away. Niall squinted his eyes, witnessing this. The police continued to jot down notes, as they were talking to Mike about what happened, far away from the others, across the room. Rena locked her fingers together and pushed them out, making a loud crack.
"And just what are you getting your fists ready for?" shouted Brad, now rolling his head around once.
"Shut up," muttured Rena, refusing to meet eyes with the boy. She crossed her arms and pouted.
"Guys! STOP! Please! This is ridiculous!" cried Princess, begining to become fed up.
Everyone's eyes quickly rolled to Princess' direction.
"I'm not preparing my fists at all," muttured Rena, pulling an awkward face.
The second cop walked out of the bathroom, turning off the light and tap, now staring at everyone.
"We have to find out who wrote the note!" blurted out Amber, "It's vital information to discover who the killer is..."
The room soon fell silent, everyone now thinking about what to do next, and the echoed words could be heard:

"Whodunit"
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04-11-2008, 09:44 AM
Post: #16
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"ummm... wha wha what was that" Ollie said in fear. bang Ollie fainted (sp?)  down to the ground with fear.Another echo "Whodunit" it sounded like it was comming from the master bedroom."arrggh the bogie man" Ollie mumbled while he was asleep.they ran to the master bedroom the police got out there guns.'smah' a window broke and the alarm went off...

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04-11-2008, 11:31 AM
Post: #17
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Ollie please don't do that again {no}.
I'm restarting on Rena's post.

Rain battered the windows like drums as the wind howled through the hall.
"I really don't want to be here, I don't want to think Nichola is dead!" Amber cried, breathing heavily.
"We need to find out though." Niall replied, adjusting his fringe out of his eyes.
"I don't care about this crap!" Amber screamed angrily.
Niall stared blankly at Amber. She pouted her lips and made a humph sound.
A silent pause was uttered, and Ollie broke the silence and asked "Maybe we should all stick close?"
"Stay Close? STAY CLOSE!?" Amber screeched, flailing her arms into the air and yelling many insults at Ollie.
"AMBER CALM THE EFF DOWN!" Mike blurted.
Amber stared at him and with one toss of her hair, she stormed down the hall in a flurry of rage.
"WE ARE NOT GONNA GET ANYWHERE WITH SHOUTING AT THE TOP OF OUR LUNGS!" Mike bellowed.
Everyone became quiet and they shuffled into different rooms.
Princess decided to slip down the hall and look for Amber.
She found her huddled in a corner with her face in her hands, sobbing.
"Amby? Are you okay?" Princess asked caringly.
Amber looked up, her tear-stained face was reddened.
Princess got down on her knees and gave her a hug.
She brought Amber back to the study where Niall was reading a big chunky book.
It was called HOW TO SURVIVE IN A MURDER CASE
"Don't read that book." Princess moaned.
The cover slipped off and it revealed a new name of the book PENDANT OF ARASNA
Amber and Princess let out a sigh of relief and they both lay in the comfy armchairs.

Hehe, signatures rhymes with pignatures. x3
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04-11-2008, 04:30 PM
Post: #18
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Princess's P.O.V:
Honestly, this is too much. Nichola was stabbed? EFFIN' STABBED? And we're all suspects for her murder? Whatever, I ain't listening to what they say. I'll just flick on my iPod and they can get on with the case - I never get any peace in my effin' life.

The story:
"Miss, would you mind putting that music player aside?" Sergeant Ned asked sternly. Princess pulled out the earphones.
"What is this, Cluedo?" she shouted.
"Well done," Ned continued. "You're now our prime suspect,"
"She didn't do it!" Oliver shouted. "She couldn't have!"
"Quite obviously, she didn't," Rena argued.

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04-11-2008, 05:06 PM
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Niall's P.O.V
I certainly don't know who to trust in this murder case. It could be anyone, trying to cover up.
I really can't take more of this crap. Nichola was a lone girl that someone stabbed for no reason.

The Story Continues....

"Sorry Miss.Correct!" Oliver said in a babyish voice. He burst out the door and down the hall.
"Don't get killed now" Rena joked in a serious tone. Oliver ignored this statement and he protested different things about his own safety.
"Has anybody seen Alisha?" Niall asked everyone when they were in the dining room eating their chicken and ham pie.
"She hasen't been seen since Nichola was murdered." Rena whispered.
Princess looked around and cried "THERES A...A..ALI-ISHA!"
Everyone glanced to see her sitting in the corner with her DS.
"Can't a girl have some peace?" Alisha demanded loudly.
"Sure if that peace is Killing!" Brad shouted accusingly.
"SHUT THE EFF UP BRAD!" Everyone yelled in unison.
Brad put his head down. Everyone started to gobble up their dinner.
After dinner was over, they all played a game of 20Q.

Hehe, signatures rhymes with pignatures. x3
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04-11-2008, 05:12 PM
Post: #20
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"I can't do this!" Brad shouted angrily.
"Me neither, we're out," Amber agreed.
"Same," Mike muttered. "This is no time for games!"
"Alisha?" Niall called. Alisha came over hesitantly.
"What?" she groaned.
"Did you do it?" Niall questioned.
"If she did it," Princess mumbled. "She wouldn't tell us,"
"Now, that's criminal psychology!" Rena accused. "It was you!"
"Y'know, the actual murderer always blames it on somebody else," Oliver explained.
"Like you just did," Amber uttered curiously.
"That tone of voice suggests that it's you!" Brad gasped.

They were falling apart.

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