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Whodunit? RP
11-11-2008, 12:21 AM
Post: #51
Re: Whodunit? RP
"OMG!!"Rena screamed. Brad and Niall both lifted him up and carried him the the couch. "Oh my gosh," Brad said,"I can't believe you broke your leg!"
Rena and Alisha were playing Scrabble.



sorry its short im tired.
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11-11-2008, 01:16 PM
Post: #52
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Niall's P.O.V
How did Ollie break his leg? It happened so fast!

Ollie fell into a restless sleep, he twisted crazily during his nap.
Rena stroked his head and Alisha sat on the other end cooing words.
Ollie mumbled and turned onto his side. Niall stood in the kitchen, drink in hand.
"What you thinking about?" Brad asked politely. "Nothing much." Niall said.
Brad shrugged and walked to the bathroom. Alisha glared at the clock. The clock struck 11am.
Ollie opened his eyes and blinked a few times, then groaning in pain.
"You should rest, that leg won't heal that good yet." Alisha said caringly. She patted down his pillow and pushed his chest back so his head would fall onto the pillow.
"Okay, I will rest." Ollie replied wearily, in between a yawn.
Soon enough he was asleep and everyone carried on to do their things.
Niall explored with Princess and Amber. Brad cooked food this time, he made pizza with Rena's help.
The aroma filled the hall and it made their mouths water.
There was a slam against the floor. Ollie fell off the couch and now was clenching his leg, groaning and screaming.
Niall and Princess helped him back up. Amber sat down and sighed from boredom.
Niall and Princess looked at eachother and sighed aswell.

Hehe, signatures rhymes with pignatures. x3
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11-11-2008, 09:28 PM
Post: #53
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Here's a small one, since no one is posting Smile

Princess and Niall then looked out the window.
They could see the long rows of flowers like dahlia, rhodadendron and tulips.
Bushes and Trees were scattered around and a pond lay near a big sassafrazz tree.
"Much more appealing outside eh?" Princess muttered unhappily.
Niall just nodded in reply. Princess looked back to Ollie, who was asleep soundly on the couch.
Alisha was playing a game that just made a sound that resembles Mario, meaning she was playing that sort of game.
Amber, Brad and Rena was in the parlour, thinking of what to do.
A gagging sound was ushered as Princess looked back.
Ollie was coughing up blood now, whatever happened was getting worse.
Princess got a tissue and wiped up the blood. When she came back Niall was gasping and shaking Ollie.

Hehe, signatures rhymes with pignatures. x3
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11-11-2008, 10:28 PM
Post: #54
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Oliver got whiter than white itself.Then Niall dropped on the ground in pain.It was spreading.The others ran into another room andstarted making there hands into a cup and put it on there mouth.

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11-11-2008, 10:41 PM
Post: #55
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Ollie writhed in pain as Alisha put her hand on his forehead.
"Woah, he's burning up! get him a cold towel!" Alisha shouted to Rena.
Rena hurried off into the kitchen and came back quickly.
She handed the towel to Alisha who put it onto Ollie's forehead.
Niall and Brad looked at eachother and Amber bit her lip.
Rena stood back as Alisha patted Ollie's head.
"I'm really afraid, I don't know what will happen." Alisha muttered.
Everyone looked at eachother.

Hehe, signatures rhymes with pignatures. x3
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20-11-2008, 09:50 PM
Post: #56
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Oliver started truning purple then green."oh no i have a mirgrane get me panadole fast.Rena ran to the kitchen  but could not find the pills then suddenly Oliver barfed all over the floor.

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21-11-2008, 07:56 AM
Post: #57
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"Ewww ... that's foul," said Rena, running into the room with the Panadol. The rest of the girls gagged.

(Sorry it's short! I need'a do homework!)
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21-11-2008, 01:31 PM
Post: #58
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Brad hurried off into the kitchen and got a sponge and water.
Alisha helped as they cleaned up the putrid vomit. The foul odour filled the room.
"Yeesh, the stench is unbearable!" Amber said, plugging her nose.
Niall choked and spluttered while trying to hold the bridge of his nose.
Rena got a can of lavender and camomile spray and a earthy smell arose in puffy clouds.
Ollie was still groaning from the pain. Alisha patted him on the shoulder.
"We need to call a docter, Ollie looks terrible!" Niall stated.
"How the hell will a docter find this place?!" Amber added scornfully.
Rena shushed her and Niall said, "The police got here, then a docter can to." Niall continued, walkign into the hall to get his cell.
"Hello Dr.Chanel?" Niall asked into his cellphone.
"We have a very sick kid here, we are at Mullberry Manor, just follow the road to nowhere and it's there." Niall explained.
"Ummm, Ok? I will be there." Dr.Chanel replied.
Niall thanked her and they all waited.
She came in and examined Ollie. She took out a pad and wrote something.
"Well, he is definatly sick, I will continue after I ask this, can I go to the bathroom?" Dr.Chanel asked, sounding embarrassed.
Brad pointed to the toliet, as Dr.Chanel hurried in.
A few minutes later, Dr.Chanel staggered out and crashed to tghe floor. She had blood coming out of her mouth, and a huge wound on her temple was pouring blood. And her case, had blood on the corner.
Which means, she was murdered!

Hehe, signatures rhymes with pignatures. x3
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22-11-2008, 01:39 AM
Post: #59
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"now comon this is sickening ive toataly had enough lets have lunch", Niall said agrely. Oliver stayed on the couch. He turned bright pink and rolled off the couch. He saw his life go past him. He coughed blood up as his eyes went blury. He had a huge black out after everything had happend. Rena was the first person to see him. Amber went down and said "he's had a black out its best for us to get him to the hospital". Rena called the hospital."oh no we have to wait 3 hours before they get they are so far away", Rena said.

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02-12-2008, 09:46 PM
Post: #60
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no ones posting and i like this so lets cotinue ill keep going!

They sat down and watched tv while they waited."Hey something smells like smoke upstairs",Brad said."ill go check it out",brad said. He rushed upstairs. Smoke filled the room. In the distance he could see a person. the mystery person disearpeard.The fire alarm went off as he coughed. He got the fire extingluxur and pulled it hard. The fire extinluxur went out of controll. Soon there was foam everywhere. He ran downstairs and fel over exusted with the puke next to him!

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