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13-07-2009, 06:53 PM
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The Keitel Legacy
This is the story of Marlon Keitel, if you want you can read it and find more info on http://keitel.sims3legacy.com/
Please comment, I am thrilled to know what you think! A Most Wanted Man Marlon Keitel was an alias, his real name was something completely different. But he didn't tell anyone that, he was Marlon Keitel. He didn't tell people why he had moved to Riverview. "I was looking for some fresh country-side air" was his explanation. And everyone believed him, Marlon was really good at convincing people. The real reason why he had left the city wasn't one he was proud of. Marlon came from a poor family and at an early age (14) he had joined the local criminal gang. Quite quickly he had advanced in ranks and came to know the leader and his closest men. Life was brilliant for young Marlon but one day when he was 17 he got caught by the police. The police intergatted him thouroghly and Marlon couldn't hold it toghether. He told them everything and the gang's leader and his closest men were arrested and sentenced to lifetime in prison. Marlon only spend three years in prison for his severe crimes. And when they let him out at the age of 20 he was certain that he was going to be killed. That's the reason why he changed his name, he took Marlon Keitel intribute to his favorite actors, Marlon Brando and Harvey Keitel. And he fled to Riverview, the last place one would look for a criminal. That's the full story, Marlon was determinded to start a family here in Riverview and build a criminal imperium. That's the reason why he bought the biggest lot avaliable. This was the foundation of his grand estate. But at the moment all he could afford was a bed, but after all it was a very nice bed! Marlon knew that on his own he could never achieve greatness. There for he went to meet the local mob (it seems that every town had one). He rang the doorbell and man in Marlonâs age opened the door. Marlon told the young man that he would like to meet the boss. After a few minutes of waiting Marlon was allowed entrance. He quickly followed the man who let him in and soon entered a grand room with a huge desk. Behind it was a man in his late forties with black hair and a big smile on his face. âSo you want to join usâ, he said with a deep voice. âVery much so Sirâ, Marlon answered trying to be as polite as possible. âWhy?â âI am new to this town and I would very much like to help you, I have been in another mob for four years so I have experince, Sirâ, Marlon said. âWhat mob?â âEhhmm, sorry Sir I canât tell you. I promised them that I wouldnât tell anyone of their existenceâ, Marlon said hoping to sound convincing. Every word in that sentence was a lie. But the boss behind the desk seemed pleased. âWelcome, my name is Sherman Bagley and you wonât disobey my orders, right?!â âOf course not Mr Bagleyâ, Marlon said with relief. He was in now, he was part of the River Mob. As time flew by Marlon worked hard for the mob. Mr Bagley seemed to care more and more about his new protogeé. He often said; âI really like you, you remind me of my younger brotherâ. Marlon would thank his boss and never ask about the brother. Marlon knew what could possibly had happened to him, either he was shot by the police or another mob or he spend time in prison. Never the less Marlon was pleased with the fact that Mr Bagley approved of him. The Pretty Petty Theives Marlon was on his way home when suddenly a police car stopped by him. A police officer went over to Marlon and said. âMr Keitel?â, the officer asked. âYes, who is asking?â âMy name is DI Skeleton and you will have to come with me to the station right awayâ Marlon didnât have much choice, he sat down in the car next to DI Skeleton. Marlon didnât want to sit in the back as some common criminal, it brought back painful memories from his youth. As DI Skeleton drove the police car through Riverview they sat quite. When they finally arrived outside the station the rain had started to fall over the humdrum town. They sat down in a small interrogation room with a small lamp and uncomfortable chairs. âWe know you know Sherman Bagley, tell us everything!â âI wonât tell you anything âcos I donât know this fellaâ, Marlon said hoping to convince the police officer. âI ainât stupid you know, I have pictures of you outside his house and of you performing petty crimesâ, DI Skeleton said with the sound of triumph on his voice. âOkay so I have meet him, but I donât really know himâ âYou know I could lock you up for your petty crimes, but I wonât if you tell me what I want to knowâ. In that moment Marlon made a choice, never rat on someone again! âI will never tell you anything, copper!â âTo bad I have to arrest you in that caseâ âSo be it!â Luckily for Marlon the DIâs threats were empty, two days Marlon spend in custody. He hated every minute of it and were thrilled to be released so quickly. He hurried to Mr Bagleyâs house. A knock on the door and Mr. Bagley opened the door with a grim look on his face. âWhere have you been?!â Marlon had never seen Mr. Bagley so angry, this wasnât the time to tell him about the time at the police station. âI visited my folksâ, Marlon said. A millisecond later he laid on the front porches floor. Blood ran from his nose and he was surprised that Mr. Bagley had hit him. âDonât you lie! The police told me everything, go home and never return here again. I feel like killing you but I wonât. But mind you if I ever see you here again I will kill you!â Love is Natural and Real? Marlon slept on a bench in the park that night. He was drunk and pi*sed of. âWho did Sherman think he was?! No one messes with Marlon Keitel!â He was woken from his dreams and anger by a sweet voice. âAre you okay?â Marlon opened his eyes and before stood the most beautiful woman he had ever seen. She had Black wonderful hair and was lovely in all possible ways. âYeahâ, Marlon answered. It was a lie, his nose hurt and his head was going to explode soon from his head ache. Or at least it felt like it. âCome with meâ she said and gave him her hand, he took it and made his way to her car. He passed out in the car and when he finally woke up he laid on a nicely made bed with nothing but his underpants on. âSo you have woken upâ she said and sat on the bed side. âDo you feel okay?â âI do nowâ, Marlon answered and smiled. âGood, Iâve most tell you something Marlonâ, she said. âMy name is Rhoda Bagley, I am Shermanâs sister-â âHis sister?! He will have me killed for thisâ, Marlon said and hurried out of the bed. âRelax, he wonât kill you. But he will if you leave and I tell him of all the horrible things you have done to meâ âWhat thing?!â âI will come up with somethingâ¦â âWhat do you want Rhoda?â âI want you to make love with me tonight, I love youâ. This sentence came quite as a chock to Marlon. âYou love me? You donât even know me!â âLove is blind, donât they say?â âI guess⦠Okay.â âOkay what?â âOkay I will be with you tonightâ As Marlon slept next to Rhoda he made a decision that would effect his entire life. He decided that he loved Rhoda, he didnât really, but he would learn to. She was nice looking and loved him. When she woke up he would ask her to marry him. He was sure she would say yes, she would agree to marry him. And Sherman would change his mind and make Marlon a member of the Sunset Mob again. But was that what Marlon really wanted, Marlon wanted a gang of his own, not be some servant of Sherman. Marlon had made up his mind, he was going to marry Rhoda, but he wouldnât rejoin the River Mob. He and Rhoda would live on the huge lot he had bought, they would become bigger and better than Sherman ever was and ever will be. When Rhoda eventually got up and Marlon went down on one knee. âWould you want to marry me?â He said and gave her the ring in his pocket (he didnât really remember how it had ended up in his pocket, but an engagement ring could always come in handy). âOh My Gosh, finally love!â Rhoda took the ring and looked extremely happy. âYou know that we would live on my lot right, we wouldnât demand anything of your brother. It would be just you and me, okay?â Marlon said to make things clear. âOf course love, just you and me, foreverâ âYeahâ, Marlon said trying to smile. He couldnât fool himself, he didnât love her but she seemed to love him. Thatâs always something. |
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13-07-2009, 08:21 PM
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Re: The Keitel Legacy
I love it! Hope you continue.
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13-07-2009, 08:26 PM
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Re: The Keitel Legacy
I loved it too! <3 Very awesome.
[center]<br />âBe vewy, vewy quiet. Weâre hunting demons.â<br />- Phoebe Halliwell<br /><br />My Sims 2 Stories and Legacies<br /><br />| Halliwell Asylum | The Willams's Legacy | The Peterson Story |<br />| Eyra - Prosperity Challenge | The Picker Family - Uglacy | <br /><br />My Sims 3 Stories and Legacies<br /> <br />| Role Legacy | Sim Share 2 | Sim Share 3 | SimsForums Legacy |<br /><br />There's new updates for the Picker Family<br /><br />| LJ | Website |<br />[/center] |
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13-07-2009, 08:28 PM
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Re: The Keitel Legacy
Thank you!
Four more parts are up at the website: http://keitel.sims3legacy.com/ And I have a pretty good idea where the story is heading. I will update the story here as well but for the freshest updates, check out the blog! It's always fun if you leave a comment on the blog, it don't have to be something spectacular just say hi or give some feedback that will make my day 8) no pressure |
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13-07-2009, 10:05 PM
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Re: The Keitel Legacy
Haha
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14-07-2009, 08:52 AM
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Re: The Keitel Legacy
At Last He Is Born!
The wedding were very small and innocent. The wedding wasnât held in a church and it didnât have any guest except Rhodaâs mother. The wedding took place at the city hall and wasnât religious in anyway, this disturbed Sherman who was very religious. Thatâs the reason why he didnât come. Sherman hadnât forgiven Marlon but he didnât plan to kill Marlon. This was comforting to know. Just a few months after the wedding the couple had settled in in a small house. It was nothing like the mansion in which Rhoda grew up but at least they had a roof over their heads. Rhoda was very pregnant and Marlon was very happy. He work a lot and tried his best to make enough money to give the unborn baby a good life. But running your own mob isnât easy, he didnât have many associates and hardly any weapons or anything to be criminal with. But he knew that some day he would succeed and become the best. Rhodaâs mother took care of Rhoda during the pregnancy, Rhoda was very weak, she was always tired and hardly got up from bed. Suddenly one day Rhoda was ready to deliver the baby, they hurried to the hospital and after 25 hours Rhoda gave birth to a baby boy. He was the most adorable little thing they had ever seen. He had grey eyes and brownish hair, and he smiled a lot. They named him Aaron Marlon Keitel, he was everything to Marlon. Finally he had a son, a baby boy. Pregnant For the Last Time Aaron was really an adorable baby, he was happy and the cutest thing alive. Marlon didnât meet his son so much, he worked all the time. He only had one thing on his mind, money! He loved his son and he didnât hate his wife, but he thought that work was more important. He had one goal with his life, to become the best mobster in the world. And he knew he had to work hard to become that. Even though he could hardly feed his small family he was thrilled when Rhoda told him the big news. âI am pregnant again, Aaron canât even walk and I am pregnantâ, she said and seemed happy. âThatâs wonderful darling!â Marlon replied. He had no idea how he would make the financial situation work but he would figure it out eventually. He hoped that he would have another son, he didnât know why he wanted one more son. Perhaps it was the love of Aaron that made him hope that he would get an Aaron II. Unfortunatly Rhodas pregnancy was as diffucled as the last one, she was ill every single day. Rhodaâs mother once again help out, Marlon worked hard and little Aaron needed to be looked after. His mother didnât have the strenght to do so but his grandma took care of little Aaron. An Unhappy Birthday The day Aaron became two years old the family had a small family birthday party. Sherman was invited, Marlon didnât like that he came but Rhoda had already invited her brother. When Sherman arrived Marlon made sure that he knew what the rules was. âThis is my sonâs party and if you ruin it, you will be sorry!â Marlon said with confidence, he knew that Sherman wouldnât touch him as long as Rhoda was his wife. âRelax, Aaron is my nephew I wonât ruin anything for himâ Sherman said and smiled. âAaron ainât nothing like you, he is my son and he will never become a lowlife like you!â âNow think about who you are talking to. I might be your wifeââs brother but I could still mess you up quiet badlyâ Sherman said and once again smiled with a sense of power. Marlon was about to answer him when he heard Rhoda scream. âI think the baby is coming!â This wasnât good news, Rhoda wasnât going to deliver now, it was way to early. Marlon ran outside and took Shermanâs car keys and drove quickly to the hospital. Rhoda screamed her lungs out and Marlon tried to think clearly. He had to keep focused. Death is Natural and Real!? Marlon couldnât believe it, in his arms laid his newborn baby boy. On a hospital bed in front of Marlon and his son laid Rhoda. She wasnât breathing and she never would again. She was gone forever. She hadnât even seen her new born baby until she died, Marlon couldnât believe it. But even though he was in chock his mind was clear. He knew what he had to do. He left his sons at the hospital and walked over to Shermanâs house. Sherman opened the door with a smile but when he saw Marlonâs sad face and exhausted look he knew something were wrong. âIs the baby okay?â, Sherman said and Marlon was surprised by this sudden empathy. âYeah, we got a healthy baby boyâ, Marlon said with a sad voice. âWhatâs the problem then?â ââI am sorry but Rhoda⦠She didnât make itâ âThatâs okay I can visit her she donât have to come hereâ âNo you donât understand. She is deadâ, Marlon said these words with tears in his eyes. Suddenly Shermanâs concerned face changed to an angry face. âWHAT!? She is dead, you useless stupid- You killed her!â âHow could I have killed her?â âIf it wasnât for you useless genes she wouldnât have had to deliver that ugly stupid baby of yoursâ âDonât you call my son stupid!â Marlon had had enough and so had Sherman. Sherman punched Marlon over the cheek and Marlon fell to the ground. But he quickly stood on his feet and fought back. Kicks, punches and other fighting skills were used. Marlon didnât feel the pain, he was chocked in every way possible. Unfortunately Sherman was stronger than Marlon and soon Marlon laid on the ground with blood over him. Sherman took out a gun from his belt and held it to Marlonâs head. âI will kill you, I should have killed you long ago! bar steward!â Marlon was really scared now, he thought of his baby boys, he loved them and was afraid he would never meet them again. Marlon closed his eyes and hoped that he would leave this world without pain. He heard a loud bang, he knew that sound. It was a gun being fired. But instead of dying he felt the weight of Sherman being moved away. He could hear police sirens and male voices shouting. Marlon opened his eyes and what he saw wasnât pleasant, Sherman laid passed out on the ground with blood all over his white shirt. Marlon backed of in chock. He looked at the police officers and didnât know what to do. He thought about running but his legs wouldnât do what he wanted to. A few officers carried Sherman away, Marlon had no idea if Sherman was dead, Marlon hoped he was. |
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18-07-2009, 05:17 AM
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Re: The Keitel Legacy
Aw, it was a very bittersweat post. Yay for babies, but its sad that his wife died. Awesome story telling though!
[center]<br />âBe vewy, vewy quiet. Weâre hunting demons.â<br />- Phoebe Halliwell<br /><br />My Sims 2 Stories and Legacies<br /><br />| Halliwell Asylum | The Willams's Legacy | The Peterson Story |<br />| Eyra - Prosperity Challenge | The Picker Family - Uglacy | <br /><br />My Sims 3 Stories and Legacies<br /> <br />| Role Legacy | Sim Share 2 | Sim Share 3 | SimsForums Legacy |<br /><br />There's new updates for the Picker Family<br /><br />| LJ | Website |<br />[/center] |
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20-07-2009, 08:38 AM
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Re: The Keitel Legacy
Here is a update on the Keitel Legacy, enjoy!
Mummy?! Marlon was really happy he never loved Rhoda, but he wasnât completely with out feelings. He cried over Rhoda and he knew he had a difficult task ahead. Sherman was locked up in prison for the next ten years or so, Rhodaâs mother had become depressed and nowadays lived at a home. And the hardest task yet to come laid ahead of him, to tell Aaron of his motherâs passing. How could he possibly ever understand? But Marlon knew he had to tell his son, now. So he sat down with Aaron who had just learnt to talk. For some months now Marlon had told Aaron that his mother had travelled and would come home eventually. Marlon hadnât had the guts to tell his son the truth. But now he was ready. âAaron I need to tell you something important, are you listening?â âYes!â Aaron answered and seemed to actually listen to his father. âYour mother she will never ever come home, I am so sorry.â Aaron looked at his father with surprise. âShe lives up in the sky, in heaven. And she is just fine.â Aaron still looked at his father with confusion. âIs she helping the stars at night?â âShe sure is, so every time you see a star, thatâs your mother telling you that everything is okay. you understand?â, this conversation had gone more smoothly than Marlon had imagined. He understood of course that Aaron didnât fully understand the truth in all this. Aaron had hardly understood that he had a brother, at night he used to call for his mother. âMummy? Mummy?! Cal is hungry! MUMMY?!â Slowly life returned to normal in the Keitel family, Marlon didnât really miss Rhoda. She had been quiet annoying from time to time, she was always angry and always made clear to Marlon that she was the boss. Marlon felt relieved that Sherman was locked away, Marlon wasnât afraid of being killed every time he left the house nowadays. But the role of the single father was something new to him, he of course loved his sons but it disturbed him that his dream in life was getting away from him. He didnât have time to do any illegal activities, he didnât even have time to work. Marlon lived on the small inheritance he had got from Rhodaâs death. The house was falling apart and nothing seemed to work. This wasnât what he had planned, Marlon wanted his sons to grow up in a palace not this dump. But some things you just canât change⦠It was a Sunday afternoon, the sun shone brightly over Riverview. Marlon laid on the grass out side his house with little Caleb crawling around in the grass. Aaron was inside playing with his toys. Aaron had grown quickly, he had the same brown hair as his father and his fatherâs nose. Marlon hoped that his sons would look just as him, he didnât want anything to do with the Bagley family. Caleb and Aaron were his sons not Rhodaâs. Marlon was woken from his thoughts by a loud scream from the house. Aaron cried loudly and Marlon ran inside leaving little Cal all alone on the lawn. At first Marlon couldnât understand where Aaron was, he was nowhere to be seen. But then he saw, Aaronâs small fingers were stuck under the toy box. Marlon quickly opened it to find Aaron sitting among his toys crying with bleeding fingers. Marlon didnât know what to do, he pick up his crying son trying to comfort him, but nothing helped. Marlon understood that he couldnât handle this and ran outside still carrying Aaron. Marlon pick up Cal from the ground and held one so on each arm. Then Marlon ran to the hospital, he found his way to the emergency and a nurse quickly came to help Aaron. âYou just sit here and waitâ the nurse said and Marlon did as he was told. He wanted to be with Aaron but he didnât have the energy to fight the nurse and run after Aaron. So he just sat on one of the chair holding Caleb in his arms. Cal cried as well, he had blood all over his clothes and face. After half an hour the nurse came back. âHe is alright, we didnât even have to sew. But he will have scars on his fingers probably all his life.â Marlon didnât care about that, a few scars you can always live with, he was just glad his son were all right. He is Called Cal After the unfortunate incident with Aaron things again ran smoothly in the Keitel family. Aaron became more and more independent which meant that Marlon could give Cal more attention. One thing Marlon noticed right away was that Cal was more reserved and not quiet as joyful as Aaron. Aaron always smiled and loved to make his father laugh. But Cal was nothing like that, he sometimes seemed a bit aloof with the rest of the world. But Marlon was sure that there were nothing wrong with his youngest son, Marlon had three younger brothers and they had acted the same way when they were toddlers. But when they got older they had become the most social creatures on Earth. Marlon didnât really want to think about his brothers, he knew he would never meet them again and that hurt. There for he gave little Cal all the attention he could. Cal seemed very attached to his father, as soon as Marlon left the room Cal would start crying. Although it sometimes was annoying generally it didnât bother Marlon, he loved being with his sons. Aaron also loved his little brother but he had started to become more and more jealous of him. Aaron wanted all his fatherâs attention and that of course wasnât possible with his little brother around. Aaron sometimes got so angry at his baby brother that he hit him. Marlon didnât fully approve of this behavior, he got angry with Aaron and sometimes even shouted. Marlon hated that part of himself, the angry and uncontrolled part. He could get angry for the smallest of things. The day of Calâs third birthday Aaron had been like a little angel. He had joined his father in the birthday singing in the morning and had been a real good little boy. This day was one of the good days, everyone was happy and things were good. But this would soon change⦠Copper A couple of years had passed and things had started to turn in the Keitel familyâs life. Both Aaron and Cal had started school and this made it possible for Marlon to have a job. He was sick and tired of crime and all he wanted was a normal life. He still dreamt of becoming the best and most known criminal in the world. But that dream seemed far from reality and he didnât want to end up like a regular thug. Thatâs the reason he had started to aply for a job. Anything would do, he really needed the money. But this day would change his plans. It was a monday morning and suddenly the doorbell rang. âHello mr. Deanâ, the police man on Marlonâs doorstep said. âYou most be mistaken, my name is Marlon Keitelâ, Marlon said and he started to sweat. âYeah sure you are mr. Deanâ, the police man said and smiled acwardly. Dammit Marlon thought, who could this common officer have found out his secret. No one knew that he really was Frank Dean, no one should know that. âI know your little secret Frank so now you listen really carefully what I have to sayâ Marlon nodded and showed the police officer in. Luckly both Cal and Aaron was at school, Marlon didnât want them to see this. âSo mr. Dean thought you could hide forever?â the police officer said and drank the tea that Marlon had served. âI am not hiding!â âSure you are, what normal man would change his name and move half across the world?â Marlon sat quiet, he didnât know what to say. âWhat do you want?â he asked the police man. âYou will have to work for me!â âFor you, I am not a copper!â âWell I want you to go undercover, do you understand?â âNot reallyâ âI have followed the new mob here in town and I want you to be my eyes and earsâ âOr else?â Marlon said and sighed. âOr else I will tell everyone of your past and tell the mob from your hometown where you areâ âYou donât leave much choice then copper!â âDonât get smart on me, I have a temperament worth the nameâ âSorry Sirâ Marlon said and felt sick because of this charade. He hated working for someone, and he once again was going to betray people. Life can be cruel⦠Meat is Murder Marlon thought it was going to be tricky getting back into the mob, but he was wrong. The new mob leader was named Kyle and he had always hated Sherman. Kyle was more than happy that Sherman was behind bars. But never the less the work in the mob was hard, Marlon could handle it but every time when he came home (the time of that could change from day to day) he was worked out and extremely tired. He made some simple food and sat around the small table with his sons. This night he had made hot dogs, the family sat down around the table. Aaron ate as if he had never seen food before and Marlon was hungry after his hard work. None of them noticed that Cal wasnât eating until they both had finished and carefully licked their own plates. âCal why arenât you eating, are you sick or something?â Marlon asked and sounded a bit worried. âI just donât want thisâ, Cal answered silently. âYou donât want it?! Itâs perfectly good food, eat it!â âNo! I donât eat meat anymore!â Cal said and his voice was suprisingly strong. âYou donât what now?â Marlon said and tried to stay calm, he was exhausted and knew he could get really angry soon. âMeat is Murder, I donât want to eat anything that walks beside me, got it dad?â Cal said and his face turned red because he was so angry. Aaron just sat beside and was amazed by the situation that took place. Cal had always been the good little brother, never bother any one, never raised his voice, until now⦠âYou will eat what I say you will eatâ Marlon said and flew up from his chair. Cal did the same thing, father and son stood up against each other. âI wonât eat any meat and thatâs all there is to it!â Cal replied. Marlon got real angry now, he pushed Cal to the wall and said âDonât be such a brat, eat it!â. Cal started crying and Marlon realised that he had gone to far, he let go of Cal. Cal ran, he ran outside and all the way to the farm he had visit several times over the last months. Cal loved just watching the animals, he loved the little lambs and the cute ducks. One day out here on the country-side he had realised that he ate those poor little animals. He swore to himself, never again! |
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23-07-2009, 07:15 AM
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Re: The Keitel Legacy
Secrets are Revealed
After several months of reports to the copper Marlon worked for he had had enough. He wasnât going to be a snitch anymore! At their regular meeting behind the old gymnasium he told the copper that. âI am sick and tired of this fiddlesticks & flapdoodle! Iâm fed up, no more snitching for meâ Marlon said and the copper laughed. âNo more snitching you say, like thatâs up to you to decideâ. âI am done with this charade, thatâs it!â Marlon said and walked away. âYou will regret this Frank Dean!â the copper shouted and Marlon ran all the way home. Even though he took the coppers threat seriously he was pleased with himself, he was a loyal man now. Later that week Aaron had quiet a suprise for his younger brother. âCal do you know what I heard to day in school?â âNo, what did you hear?â Cal was curios and eager to listen. âMichael told me that our fatherâs real name is Frank Dean and that he is a crook. âWhat!! Is that true?â Cal was really chocked. âI donât know, letâs ask dad when we get homeâ. The both boys hurried home on their bikes, they didnât even park them. Aaron was first inside the house and on the bed laid his father, he was sleeping. âDad!â Aaron shouted. âWhat!â Marlon shouted back annoyed by the rude awakening. âIs it true that your real name is Frank Dean and that you are a crook?â âWho said that?â âMicheal and his father is a police officer so it must be trueâ. Marlon didnât need to much time to figure out what had happened. Kyle had told his son Marlonâs secret and the son had told Aaron and Caleb. âOkay boys listen carefully nowâ Marlon said and his sons sat next to him in the bed. âI didnât grew up here in Riverview, I grew up some where completely different. I grew up with my father who was drunk most of the time and my mother who was pregnant most of the time. And of course loads of siblings, mostly brothers. We were very poor and there for I got in to the criminal line in life, and I am not particularly proud of that. But I had to and when I first had started with that sort of life I learned to like it. Then I betrayed my mob, boys never betray anyone. Loyalty is the most important thing in life. After betraying the mob I had to escape so make sure never to call me Frank Dean again. Do you understand?â Marlon looked at his sons and they both shocked their heads in understanding, this were their secret. The next day they beat down Micheal behind the school, they wanted to make sure that he never told anyone their fatherâs secret. The beating of Michael served itâs purpose, no one said anything about the fact that Marlon Keitel really was someone else. The next years went smoothly by. Marlon accepted the fact that his youngest son was a vegetarian, but Marlon refused to do vegetarian cooking for Cal. There for Cal learnt to cook very early in life. Aaron look more like his father every day that passed and he had started to become more and more like Marlon. During the last years he had learnt to Schmooze his way through life, thatâs one of the reasons that his grades were so good. Marlonâs career went smoothly as well, he worked hard and hoped that he would fulfill his dream before he died. He would love to live in a grand house and be filthy rich. But at the moment the house was pathetically small and the boys shared room. This created some tension, Aaron had turned 17 and Cal 16, they need some space of their own. The house was a place of chaos, it was small and cluttered with things. There was always someone fighting, often it was the brothers. Of course they loved each other but they hated to be forced to sleep in the same room. Aaron had started to work at the local grocery store, he didnât really like the job but he loved the money he earned. The job suited him well, he knew how to handle all sorts of costumers and the elderly ladies just loved the charming young man. Cal had also started to work, he worked at the cemetery. This wasnât the best job a young man could get, his boss was always cranky and he often came home exhausted because of the hard work. But he could consider himself lucky to even have a job, he wasnât as charming as his brother nor as clever. You Are The Sun and the Air Cal wasnât as handsome as his brother but he was more popular with the girls. He was very poetic and often said the right things just by luck. And he was very much in love with a girl in his class, her name was Sharonda Beckenridge. Cal was never the shy type, he said what he thought and now he really wanted to tell Sharonda that he loved her. It was lunch break and Sharonda wasnât with her friends, she sat alone at a bench. A perfect opportunity to express his feelings. âHello Sheronda!â Cal said and smiled. âHello Cal, but donât call me Sheronda, call me Cherie insteadâ âSure Cherie, I need to tell you something importantâ âAnd what might that be?â âLet me put it like this; if the rain falls hard on this hum drum town a sun still shines brightly, you are that sun! If you and I were in space I wouldnât need a space suit, you would be my airâ Cherie looked at him curiously. âI am sorry Cal but I donât really understand what you meanâ¦â âEhh⦠I Love You!â âYou do, I think I love you to!â âOhh. Well thatâs great, shall we kiss now?â âYeah, probablyâ And that was it. They were a couple, Cal was so happy. He had never felt this way before, he loved her and more importantly she loved him back. Nothing could ruin his life now, he was invincible. Or so he thought⦠You Can Pin and Mount Me Like a Butterfly Aaron worked really hard at the Grocery Store, he was proud of his job and loved the fact that he made more money per hour than Cal. But things would soon change, he meet the owners wife, her name was Heather. Heather was very beautiful and more importantly she was bored to death with her husband. She gave Aaron small compliments at work all the time, âYou sure are handsomeâ or âI would love a boy like you next to meâ. Aaron didnât really mind, he was flattered, no one had ever said those kind of things to him. One day after work Heather asked him to meet her in the old warehouse, he agreed. Aaron went inside and there she was, Heather smiled at him and said. âHello Handsome, tonight is our nightâ âYeah I guessâ Aaron said, he wasnât stupid he knew exactly where this was going. And he quiet liked it, or at least he thought he did. He didnât really know, it was a completely new experience. âYou can pin and mount me like a butterflyâ Heather said and kissed Aaron on the cheek. She grabbed his hand and took of his shirt but then they were abruptly interuped. The door opened and there stood Odin, her husband and Aaronâs boss. âWhat the fudge is going on here!?â He walked straight to Aaron and looked him angrily in the eye. âWhat are you doing to my wife you little bar stewardâ âNothing Sirâ Aaron said and quickly put on his shirt, he was scared now. Aaron was never scared but in this moment he felt fear taking controll of all parts of his body. âNothing you sayâ Odin shouted and punched Aaron to the ground. Then he contiuned beating poor Aaron. Aaron didnât know what to do, he just lied there on the ground, crying. After a while Odin left and after him Heather. Aaron couldnât move, he slowly grabbed his phone and called his father. âDad?â¦â âYes Aaron. Where are you itâs 2 am?!â Marlon was angry. âI am at the warehouse can you help me, I canât walkâ âOkay, just stay putâ Marlon said annoyed over the fact that his son drank so much he couldnât even walk home. But When Marlon arrived at he became chocked. He lovely little boy laid there on the wooden floor, he was covered in blood and cried. âMy poor son!â Marlon said and ran over to Aaron. He sat down on the floor holding Aaronâs head in his arms. Then he lifted his grown son and carried him all the way to the car and then drove quickly to the hospital. The doctors quickly attended Aaron and meanwhile Marlon called Cal. When Cal finally arrived at the hospital Aaron had told Marlon exactly what had happened. Marlon was furios and went over to Odinâs house. He rang the doorbell and Odin opened. Marlon didnât say anythig he just kicked and punched Odin, all his anger he realsed on this man. In the distans he could here sirens but he was blinded by his hate for this man, no one was allowed to hurt his son! Marlon didnât stop the beating until three police officers grabbed him and pushed him into the police car. Marlon sat in the back seat and was still angry and violent. But he couldnât do much about it, he was hand cuffed and sat in a police car. Marlon knew this was going to end badly. |
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23-07-2009, 07:16 AM
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Re: The Keitel Legacy
HEIR POLL
Things didnât go to well for Marlon, after his arrest he was sentenced to seven years in prison. Aaron was devastated, he hated every copper in the world. They didnât understand a single thing, none of them. Thatâs the reason he wanted to become a copper himself. He was going to become the best copper ever alive. Caleb was very upset as well but he was angry, he hardly ever got really angry. He just cooked and hoped that the frying pan would take his sorrows away. But he knew now that he want to follow in his fatherâs footsteps. But not as a common thief. He wanted to become a chef, a really good one. He wanted to buy all the restaurants and all the rackets in the world. Every one should pay him for protection. But he wasnât going to become a thug, he wanted to be a mafioso. Itâs time to vote. If you vote for Aaron you will get a devoted copper who despite the fact that his father is a mobster wants to serve the law. He loves his father and really wants to protect him, so we are looking at a corrupt copper. TRAITS: Brace, Light-Sleeper, Schmoozer, Clumsy, Perfectionist. LIFE TIEM WISH: Become a International Super Spy If You want to vote for Caleb you will get a friendly guy who looks up to his father. He have no problems with the fact that his dad is a mobster, Caleb want to become one as well. But not the violent sort, but the sort with a big mansion and lots of money. Like The Godfather. TRAITS: Brave, Exitable, Vegetarian, Friendly, Lucky LIFE TIME WISH: Become Celbrated Five-Star Chef. Please cast your vote here: http://forum.thesims3.com/jforum/posts/l...age#680350 If you donât have a sims3.com account you can vote in a comment. Good Luck! |
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