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21-03-2013, 08:42 PM
Post: #31
RE: Hope
I heart drainpipes.
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28-03-2013, 08:20 AM (This post was last modified: 28-03-2013 08:21 AM by Ollie.)
Post: #32
RE: Hope
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Theodore and I have been having a great time getting along (I swear this isn't child abuse).
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It was Theodore's first day at school and he was one joyful lolly!
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After our marriage, a friend thought it would a great idea to send me a large ice-skating rink as a present. what a useful object. Jeez.
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After a day of raking in the guitar playing tips, Jamie came home just a bit cold.
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In the middle of the night Jamie went into labour, whilst I freaked out for the second time.
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Theodore was also scared for life, watching his mother give birth in his own home. Sick
I present to you Gracie Hope! A lively young girl.
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The next morning I woke up with a question on my mind.
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'Jamie wake up,' I said. 'Where's Theodore?'
Edit: Arghhhh! Why don't these paragraphs work!!!!

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28-03-2013, 09:42 AM
Post: #33
RE: Hope
That was a great update! You made me laugh like mad. I've never heard anyone called a "joyful lolly" before!

That school bus was parked at one heck of an angle wasn't it.
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29-03-2013, 03:05 AM (This post was last modified: 29-03-2013 03:07 AM by Ollie.)
Post: #34
RE: Hope
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I walked out of the police station unsatisfied after an interview lasting a couple of hours and no sign of Theodore.
Jamie had stayed and home and looked after Gracie whilst I was gone.
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I got home worried as the thought of my own child being dead.
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I gave Jamie a big hug, after telling her that "Nothing had been found with Theodore."
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The next morning I woke up, attempting to put on a brave face.
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I attempted to go by my daily business, picking up the newspaper.
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I began reading without surprise.
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A young boy, Theodore Ray Hope, Went missing yesterday afternoon..."
I stopped reading and quickly chucked it out to spare Jamie the pain.
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Days past by with no information and Gracie slowly turned into a Toddler.
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I myself, was barely coping.
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Jamie seemed fine on the outside, but I could tell that on the inside she was suffering worse than me.
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Later in the night I received a call.
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"David hope?"
"We've found some information."

Okay this paragraph thing is really starting to bug me.

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29-03-2013, 09:15 AM
Post: #35
RE: Hope
I hope they find him safe and well. This is a good story, Ollie!

What's wrong with the paragraphs? It looks OK to me.
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29-03-2013, 09:54 AM
Post: #36
RE: Hope
There's supposed to be spaces between the pictures to determine which picture goes with which piece of writing easier.

Anyway, I'm glad that you're enjoying it Caspin! Big Grin

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29-03-2013, 11:44 AM
Post: #37
RE: Hope
Is it my computer or are the pictures a bit dark? Dunno

A large ice skating rink for a wedding present - fudge yeah, who needs pots & pans or a slow cooker! Biggrin

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30-03-2013, 10:50 AM (This post was last modified: 30-03-2013 10:53 AM by Ollie.)
Post: #38
RE: Hope
Note: the following post contains suggestively violent content that may offend.

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Excitedly, I picked up the morning paper and read.
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"A breakthrough on the missing Theodore Ray Hope case. The man seen in the previous image was last seen with the missing 7 year old boy. A witness came forward telling police that he saw the elderly man walking whilst holding the young boy's hand in the parking lot by the local theatre. Sadly the boy has not yet been found. If you have any information at all that may help this case, please contact crime-stoppers at 0100-822."
As you could imagine, both Jamie and I were over-joyed with this great news!

I was so excited, that I decided to do something useful, teaching Gracie to talk!
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Suddenly, Jamie snapped and yelled, "He's dead, I know it."
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"How do you Know?" I spat back at her.
"I just know, okay, I just know it!"
"Listen Jamie, we are going to get through this and we are going to find Theodore. Trust me."

Angered by Jamie's comments, I decided to go out and take a walk.
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When I got home I was shocked to find an object in Jamie's hand.
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"Jamie, wh.. what are you doing?" I stuttered.
"We won't find Theodore, he's up there and where down here," Jamie said with force. "I'm going to join him, come with me."
"Jamie no," I said calmly. "Put down the gun and-"
"NO!" She yelled.
"JAMIE, PUT DOWN THE GUN!" I pleaded with her.
"NO!" Again she yelled. "I SWEAR, I'M GOING TO DO IT."
"Jamie stop, we'll get through this," I tried the calm approach again.
"Good-bye then," she chose her final words.
"Jamie?" I cried. "JAMIE NOO!!!"
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30-03-2013, 11:57 AM
Post: #39
RE: Hope
Bloody hell! I wasn't expect that one! Shocked

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30-03-2013, 12:27 PM (This post was last modified: 30-03-2013 11:29 PM by Caspin.)
Post: #40
RE: Hope
Fudge me, neither was I!

Now your chap will have to search for info on Theo, bring up Grace and mourn Jamie all on his lonesome. I do not like the sound of this old dude who was seen allegedly holding the boy's hand in the park. Sounds dodgy as hell!

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