The Story of a Random Girl.

[Chanel]

Zara is so mean =[ I was hoping she was the type that LOOKS mean but is nice. If I were Allyn I would kick her out in like a month xD



I love the house in the background =DDDDD

[Majick]

Great update!

WOO HOO!

[Earth Mama]

UPDATE! as I said.
First the text. then the picture.


Episode 3


Zara returns from work and brings on some things with her, as she said!
"Come here and help me move this rubbish" she yells at her friend.




"If someone sees all this mess, will call the police to arrest us, ha-ha."




"And we will be sent to Jail too, I suppose..."




Allyn comes out and Zara sees her, turns the radio on and starts to dance: "Heya, come and join me, this is fun"
"No thanks, it's alot of fun watching you!" laughs Allyn.




Next morning...

Allyn had a nightshift as a Paramedic and wanted to get more sleep.
But Zara on the other hand... got up earlier and tried her singing talent on her small microphone.

"Never cared for what they doooooooo
Never cared for what they knoooooooow
But IIIIII knoooooow... "




( she was AWFUL I tell ya XD with 0 Creativity skill)

"So close, no matter how far
Couldn't be much more from the heart
Forever trusting who we aaaaaaaare
And nothing else matteeeeers... "

"Zara, what the hell are you doing?" appears Allyn half asleep and dizzy...
I worked hard last night and I'm trying to get some sleep here! Be more quiet, would you please?"




"So she wasn't kidding when she said she'd bring her stuff in. I guess she takes the 'make yourself at home' expression too seriously. And her singing made me puke. Her dog is destroying my garden. She was rude and laughed at my career and my material condition. What more could I take? Getting a roommate was a BAD idea!"




As she went to change in the bedroom, she met the crazy, drunk, neighbourhood widow, Frank Rosenthal who sneaked in and started to harass Allyn.
"Why are you women always after us? Why? You've broke my heart! I hate you and your whole kind! It was you who killed her! You!!!"
"Wha-what?! I didn't kill anyone!"
"Yes you did! Because you're jealous! You took her away from me, thinking I'll run to you if you did!"
"I wouldn't hurt a fly, I swear! Please, go away! If I'm single it doesn't mean I'm also a killer!"




"I hate you! I hate you! Go to hell!"
"This isn't my day! Why me?"




Zara came home and found Allyn lost in her thoughts, she figured that something went wrong and asked her to put on a nice dress. "We're going out and have some fun, she said."




She worked a bit as  DJ so she could see everything was going on. Zara had some friends running that club, so they allowed her to.




Allyn, while dancing, has spotted a cute blond-guy and pointed him to Zara.




"So, did you see that red-headed girl in purple dancing next to you? She said you were cute. She likes you."
"What girl? Nope, I didn't notice her."
"Anyway, would you like a girlfriend? She's free and looking for someone..."
"I'll pass on this one."
"Okay, you don't know what you're missing buddy."




"How did it go? Does he like me?" asks Allyn excited.
Zara: "Neah, I know this guy. We were classmates once. The silliest 2-legged creature that ever lived on this planet. He danced rumba in his underwear once at our end of year Reunion. He likes eating his own cerumen, picks his nose ALOT and the stench of his feet would kill a brontosaurus."
Allyn: "Eeeewwww!"
Zara: "Oh, believe me, I nearly died when he opened his mouth to talk to me. I don't think you'd want to go near him."




Allyn: "Oh, look! He's coming to the dance floor!"
"And he's dancing like an idiot. Let's watch and make fun of him!" says Zara.




"Let's make him jealous, shall we? And dance together" says Zara again, grabbing Allyn's back.




"And how about this?"
"Zara, you're crazy! stop! Or, don't! Go on! He deserves it."




"May I try this too?" asks Allyn.
"Sure, I don't mind."




Allyn: "Now that was alot of fun. We shall do this again nome time. Altho I didn't find any guy 'twas very nice."
Zara: "He-he, of course. I will make a right choice for you, my dearie."
Allyn: "Dearie?!"
Zara: "Yes, 'dearie'. We're good friends now, right?"
Allyn: "Sure!"




"But if you want to keep a guy, you should know only one thing. This."




"I suddenly felt wild shivers through my spine and all became blurry. Was it a good thing? Was it bad? I was too dizzy to figure. I didn't want to figure. But it felt so good...
...What does this mean?" Allyn's thoughts.

[Chanel]

O:
That was unexpected!
Great job! :3
By the way, I'm glad Allyn didn't end up with the blonde guy; he looks like a dork XD

[Majick]

Nice Twist!

And omg that guy was so dorky looking xD

Dancing in a LAB COAT lolololol!!!

What a loser

[yummybunny]

Wow, what an awkward ending!  I really didn't expect that.  Like it though.

This is really a great start, and it is getting addicting.  Can't wait for the next update.

[Chanel]

Totally! Plus, he has bad hair O_o

[Earth Mama]

UPDATE!  {yes}


Episode 4


Next morning, Allyn woke up on the livingroom couch. She didn't remember a thing, because she was probably too tired to know what's been going on.



But then, she was very happy and daydreaming.



And all of a sudden she felt like eating something fresh.



And enlarging her flower garden...



"And since that night, I feel like I'm flying. Zara changed my life completely. I don't know what she did to me, but I'm the happiest. I love her."



"You heard me. Yes, I'm in love with her. And she's in love with me. I just know it. We were meant to be together and I'm glad I met her. Thank you, Zara!"



Life went on for the girls...
"More on the left. I'm tense there. Ow. Much better..."



"And yeah, he came to my house and started shouting at me that I killed his wife and such nonsense. Can you believe it?(...) It was horrible, believe me.(...) He did this to you too?"



Allyn also worked hard for her promotion and everything seemed like fun now. She made a wish for every shooting star she's seen.



They bought a double bed and they shared it eversince.



"Don't you find it weird that men are more obsessed with football then with women?" asks Allyn.



"I think men are silly." says Zara.



"Who needs stupid guys when we got each other?" laughs Allyn.



"Wow, Allyn, you're good at this! Go on!"
"You like it, huh?"
"Amazing! Keep it on."



"Allyn is weird, am I right Princess?"
"Bow-wow!"
"I thought that too."



"I don't think it's wrong to love another woman, is it?"



But Zara had a little secret to keep... this guy whom she met one night.



Like any morning, Allyn went to work without suspecting anything.
"Just perfect!" says Zara to herself.



"The coast is clear. You can come over now."



"I look good today, isn't it? The mirror didn't break. It's a good sign."



"Hey...Zara!"
"Hey, Dan. Come in. I have something for you."



Zara and Dan started to dance on Zara's favourite hit.
"Do you like this song, Danny? It's killer!"
"Yeah, I love it! Can you make me a copy of the CD?
"Of course, dearie."



"Alright, now that the song is over, how about getting into my bedroom and give you what I wanted to give you."
"oh, sure!"



"where is it?"
"Here." says Zara.
"Where? I don't see anything."



Zara: "Don't play dumb with me and let's get into action!"
Dan: "Ohhhh. Why don't you say so?"





Allyn returned from work and she was happy as always. And had a promotion, too.



Zara, acted as if nothing happened when she was out.



"Congrats on that promotion."says Zara.
"Thanks."



"And how was your day?"asks Allyn.
Zara: "Eh, boring. I watched fashion TV all morning. Then I payd the bills, spanked Princess for peeing on the carpet..."
Allyn: "Wait! MY carpet?!"
Zara: "I cleaned, don't worry."



Allyn: "It's snowing. did you see that?"
Zara: "Yeah, I can't wait for Christmas."



"Great, now I'm hungry again."





"Great, first snow and winter isn't supposed to be here yet!"



"Oh no! screams Zara, Don't tell me! It can't be possible! I used protection. My secret can't be kept anymore."




"I know Allyn loves me. I feel it. She won't understand. I think I'm going to sleep until the baby is born, so she won't see I'm pregnant."



Well, it's her life after all....



Will Allyn understand this? Will she kick Zara out of the house? how will life go from now on?

Find out on our next update!

[Majick]

Holy Cow :o  I didn't see that coming at all!

Poor Allyn!  Zara is a little {cursing} for doing that to her!  But, I myself am the type of person to forgive and forget the first time ... so if it were me, I'd be PO'd for a while, but eventually ... I'd get over it.

There's a baby on the way now ... does this mean ... the guy will be in their life :o  Poor Allyn!!!

[yummybunny]

I know!

Can't wait to see what happens next though.  That's what she gets though for cheating.  It's always the good men or women who get their hearts broken the most. 

I wish that people who just wanna cheat or something should just tell them up front.  Like I was watching this one comedian, and she said, "Men should have their side effects labled on the side of their heads."  Like, "This man is prone to cheat with your best friends, beat a woman's butt, and run up your credit."