The Story of a Random Girl.

[Majick]

(13-03-2009 09:57 PM)Bat link Wrote:Alright guys, I've already talked to him about it.

Please, lets move forward with the thread.

It is a great story.

Sorry. Was not aware it was already addressed :3  But seriously, I agree. Good, good story.

[Majick]

(13-03-2009 09:54 PM)oommpff; teh rena. link Wrote:[quote author=MÅJIÇK link=topic=5077.msg183823#msg183823 date=1236977572]
[quote author=Oisín link=topic=5077.msg183805#msg183805 date=1236973169]
YOUR STORY SUCKS

That was quite un-needed.

I don't see you trying to write a story.  So your criticism (or sheer rudeness) is not appreciated.
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-high fives-
You tell him Jen!

O:
i reckon you should be a mod. you ARE adored by everyone, and ish super smart :3
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Hmmm ... no, that's okay :3  The moment I tried to ban someone I'd start crying, LOL  Plus, get me on a bad day and the entire site would get blown up xD  It's just easier for me to sit back and choose my battles, LoL

[Earth Mama]

Thanks guys. *blushes* {blush}

is it me or someone took away my karma? {blink}

[Majick]

Honestly, I'm not sure.  o_o  It is possible, I suppose ... hmmm.

[Earth Mama]

Maybe it was just me. LOL. {lol}

[Majick]

I did give you a Karma, because your updates have been amazing :3

[Rena]

LOL, I DID ASWELL!

xD

[Earth Mama]

Thanks! {woot}

I think it's enough for today, cause I'm getting spoilt.

[yummybunny]

Wow a lot happened since after this update!  Lol!

But great update though!  Penelope does look kind of like her father in the face.

[Earth Mama]

UPDATE!
Episode 7

Penelope was growing up beautifully and now was going to school. She's now wearing a cute lolita dress, Zara picked for her.



Dan called back a few times and Allyn was always turning him down saying that Zara doesn't live there anymore. But he still kept on calling. He most probably liked hearing a woman's voice talking to him. Who knows?



Zara was working on the car by night when the air was cooler.


And one morning she finished it!



Allyn has read about different things being burried around her house. Eh! I guess the only things were water pipes.



Zara was working hard to get those pennies roll in.



And she was helping Penelope with homework as the end of the school year was almost over and the kid needed good marks.



She was a very good and friendly little girl. She wasn't creating a havoc like other kids. She prefered watching TV.



Penelope made a passion for electronic music and loved composing songs on the synthesizer!



And liked playing with other kids.



When it came to studying Penelope was very serious. The perfect kid, everyone would dream of!



"Yes! I am the first in my class! Mommy Mommy!"



"My final report card is here! woo-hoo!!!! I have overall A+! Can you believe it???"
"This is great, Penelope! You know how proud we are. We knew you will make it." replies Allyn.



All the girls needed now was a vacation. School was over, the holiday break was here, so Allyn called to arrange and make a reservation on Twikkii Island!
You've heard me, Twikii! Similar to Hawaii. ; )



The next thing they knew - they hop in the cab that took them to the airport.



Suzie Town was the place they picked up to stay! Those little houses were cool and had everything they needed to keep their moods to the max.



Allyn went to watch the ocean waves and feel the sun rays and the breeze.
Penelope jumped into a hamock watching the sky: "Look, Seagulls!"
"Yup. They're great birds. And noisy too. They're very wise and can catch a fish in their flight."says Allyn.
"Yeah? Cool!"



"Let's see who finds the most beautiful shell! Shall we?" says Allyn all of the sudden.
"I'm in for the biggest!"
They started combing in the sand.



Zara meanwhile, has returned from the reception and decided to take a swin in the ocean!



They all had a relaxing day in the sun.



"Ow snap! I'm red like a crab now! I'm itching everywhere! Next time I won't exagerate. Let's get Zara and go visit something."



"The Ancient ruins of Numchuck! Here we are! Wooow!" shouts Penelope!



After they made an offering each, Allyn sat on the fountain to rest. "This kid has so much excitement in her and is so full of life!" she thinks.
Penelope and Zara hugged: "Thanks mommy, for this wonderful vacation! I just love the seaside!"
"You're welcome! By the way, your other mommy planned it. Go and hug her too" winked Zara.



Zara got hungry and tried the pineapple special food... She loved it and asked for another plate!



Then she returned and had fun with the others at the fountain.



Zara added some soap in the fountain and suddenly a voice talking in an ancient unknown language that sounded like a curse could be heard and the water turned to fire. She got scared. Allyn made another offering and it cleared up again in no time.



"I don't believe curses exist. I believe it was just an awesome effect planned out by the locals." she thinks.



Day Two:
Zara wakes up first and cooks breakfast. They had a delicious meal that morning everyone enjoyed: Meat Rizole!



They chose another fun place to spend the day: a beach! Allyn and Zara decided to have fun on the beach and catch some sun rays, while Penelope prefered to play on the old pirate ship.



"I can see the whole world from here!" exclaims Penelope.



"Harrrr! take this! and that! Ha.Ha!"
Zara takes a picture.



Later on, after they had their fun, the girls decided to search for the secret lot marked on the small map Zara found in their backyard.
They went there and instead they found a leaf house, with broken furniture.
"This could be our second house, you know? Let's forget the small town and get to fix it!" says Allyn.



So, the girls decided to spend the night there. Penelope was tired and had a nap on the couch. There wasn't any bed in that small house.
They had fun and made themselves at home.



When Penelope woke-up, had breakfast, while the mommys had coffee.
"Did you sleep well?" asks Allyn.
"Neah, not too well. I need a warm bed. I wanna go back home and get some good sleep." complains Penelope.



The little girls sees a hammock in the back of the house and she's happy.



"Hello little girl." says a masked man while hang-loosing.
"Hi there, old man."replies while hang-loosing.
"I have a gift for you."
"A gift? But how?"
"I love it when children are smart and full of life and excited. Like you. Have my congrats."
Hands her a small package: "Don't open it until you get home. You'll see what it is."
"Thank you! I won't!" replies excited Penelope.



Allyn and Zara saw the scene and how their daughter became even more happier. They were proud and couldn't help but kiss and congratulate.
They wished for this vacation will last forever.



They returned to Suzie Town because Penelope needed to rest and spent the rest of the day there watching waves and swimming in the ocean.





The next day, the girls went to another cool beach and greeted with the locals.



"Mommy! Mommy! Come quick! Look what this man is doing! Cooool!"
Penelope saw a young man performing the fire dance.



Zara of course, as excited offered to learn it. Well, for fun.





"It's so bad our vacation is over.We had such a great time!"says Allyn.
"Yeah. But we will come back here one day. Maybe next summer."says Zara.
"I can't wait for the next holiday!" exclaims Penelope.



"Mommy, I'm hungry!"
"Let's bake some marshmallows!"
"Um-hum!!!" approves Allyn.
"Marshmallows! I always wanted to eat this stuff!" says Penelope.



Zara wakes up in the middle of the night: "Psst, Allyn!"
"What is it, Zara?" 
"Let's do something crazy."
"Like what?"
"Something I wanted to do for a loong time!"



So they took a walk pn the beach naked...



Cuddled on the sand...


(this pic might pretty soon get deleted altho it's censored, LOL.)

And ... on top of that...



"Let's do this!"



The magic had to be broken by the cab that came to pick the girls that morning.
Now it was all a bunch of nice memories. But they also took alot of pics!



Penelope got a really nice tan and a pair of brand new shell earrings.



...
"Now that was the best time of my life! When I grow up, I want to travel the whole world..." says Penelope.
"Of course you will, my dear." approves zara.
"We're so glad you want to see the world!" says Allyn.





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